Don’t Forget To Take A Breath Before You Fall - Comments

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! As a teenage girl i loved it, as a writer myself, I enjoyed it, and as a critique I have to say there is nothing to critisize. I know I'm really late on reading this story but when I searched and found this I coldn't wait to read this. It really brought life straight down to the core! The Epiloque was creative and I absolutely enjoyed it. So I have to saw five stars =) Congratulations on those subsribers and if I was reading this way back when it was still updating I would have to subscribe!

That was really good. Original idea, great writing, suspence, it all makes for a good story. :)

Oh my goodness, you two are amazing writers. Mibba is lucky to have you(:
I loved this story to the fullest point, it was one of the best Jonas fanfics I've read. <3

Chapter 27-- That ending was brilliant, amazing, wonderful, perfect and a hundred more adjectives for the word 'beautiful'. =]. This was such a great story. The plot line was so original. One of the few "Jonas Sister" stories I actually really like. And once again, you threw me a curveball when Kat went to talk to Damien in jail. She's such a crazy girl, but I see her point. She was changed, and for the better. You two did a wonderful job on this story. You should be very proud. =].

Chapter 26-- I like the idea of a happy ending at this point. I feel like I've been on an emotional rollar coaster after reading this story, haha.

Chapter 25-- Oh thank goodness, she seems somewhat safe. I cant' wait for the reunion with her family!

Chapter 24-- Of course, a girl who loves the Jonas Brothers; and Nick, no doubt. I don't think her escape could possibly be this easy, but RUN KAT RUN!

Chapter 23-- Hm, Damien's bipolar attitude is kind of confusing me now. And stupid brother Greg. Idiot. AND HE'S IN JAIL!? YEAH!

Chapter 2-- THAT IDIOT DAMIEN! I KNEW HE WAS NO GOOD. Ok, no I didn't, but gah! This story has kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time!

Chapter 21-- Oh my gosh. I'm like ready to cry my eyes out. She better not die!

Chapter 20-- I like the word hope there at the end. Beautiful ending, the wording was just perfect. Now, if only they could find her. =].

Chapter 19-- God how I hate whoever this guy is. Is it Damien?! I don't know! Jonas Brothers go save her already!

Chapter 18-- OH MYGOSH. WHO IS THIS GUY?! I'm dying over here. Need to read more!

Chapter 17-- KAT BETTER BE SAVED! I feel like I'm in the middle of some soap opera that I just happen to be apart of, watching on the sidelines of everything. This story is so realistic!

Chapter 16-- OH MY GOSH. WHAT THE HECK JUST HAPPENED?!

Chapter 15-- GO JOESPH! What a knight in shining armor. Too bad they are brother and sister, haha. So cute! And Nick was hilairous, haha.

Chapter 14-- Wow. I know I said this before, but good thing her brothers are there. I love how sweet they're being, although Kat was so mean to them.

Chapter 13-- I guess brothers do know best. Wow, I can't believe Damien would try to do that. Certainly a twist of events I didn't see happening in the beginning of the story.

Chapter 12-- OH MY GOSH. SHE BETTER NOT BREAK HER PROMISE. WHAT THE HECK IS HAPPENING?!

Chapter 11-- Pushin' Me Away is a great song for all that's happening right now. Great choice. Again, I must say fantastic writing guys. This story is perfection. I love it!