Don’t Forget To Take A Breath Before You Fall - Comments

  • Be My Escape

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    Chapter 10-- WOWZERS. That was one HECK of a DRAMAFILLED chapter. Wow is Damien changing her. And definetly not for the better. What is up with Kat?! She just PUNCHED SOMEONE!
    July 13th, 2009 at 01:14am
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    Chapter 9-- Hm, still getting fishy feelings about Damien. Kevin and Joe and Nick are rubbbing off on me I think, haha. =].
    July 13th, 2009 at 01:12am
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    Chapter 8-- Oh, that ending was brilliant. Boy is that girl in trouble, haha.
    July 13th, 2009 at 01:03am
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    Chapter 7-- I LOVED LOVED LOVED the last sentence in this chapter. BRILLIANT!!! =]. Fantastic writing, again, I must say. I love how I can't tell when the different author takes over. It flows wonderfully. =]. And why do I have the feeling that something is off about Damien? He better not just be using Kat. I would punch him along with Joe. Haha. =].
    July 13th, 2009 at 01:02am
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    Chapter 6-- I was right. I love Damien already, haha. =]. And Frankie, being a snitch. Of course, haha. And uh oh. Drama ahead. ;). Wonder how the Jonas boys will react to her going on a date, =].
    July 13th, 2009 at 12:58am
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    Chapter 5-- I can already tell that I'm going to love Damien by the end of this story. Hopefully, he'll be around more. =]. I really don't want this story to end, but I can't stop reading it! It's addicting, haha.
    July 13th, 2009 at 12:56am
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    Chapter 4-- Hm, interesting comment by her, by saying No Comment. Wonder if she's trying to be strong and just take the high road. =].
    July 13th, 2009 at 12:53am
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    Chapter 3-- Good thing for brothers who love you. I loved seeing the Jonases so protective and caring and loving. Great job still!
    July 13th, 2009 at 12:52am
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    Chapter 2-- Again, I feel SOOO bad for Kat. She doesn't deserve that. I have no idea how you could put up with all of that crap that the haters are giving her. I hope she rocks the tour. =].
    July 13th, 2009 at 12:49am
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    Chapter 1-- Wow do I feel bad for Kat. That would be so hard to be related to the Jonases like that. And comments being thrown at you like that? She deserves to release a few tears. Great first chapter, and writing!
    July 13th, 2009 at 12:15am
  • BreathBeforeTheKiss

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    Great job you guys!
    Loved the final chapter.
    Can't believe it's over though =[
    July 9th, 2009 at 06:09pm
  • Confide.

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    usually rite now id be begging you for a sequel. but this was perfect. no sequel is needed. i loved it!
    July 9th, 2009 at 08:05am
  • swell

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    The ending was so good, with Damien. I'm glad he's not a fully psycho wannabe loser. :)
    July 9th, 2009 at 07:31am
  • barnes bucky.

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    I loved this so much! :)
    Living the dream, baby, living the dream! haha ;D
    July 9th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • weshouldgetjerseys.

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    Aw, I loved this!
    It was AMAZING. (:
    Great ending, too! (:
    July 9th, 2009 at 02:48am
  • Nonname25

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    This is a cool story! I subscribed to it.
    July 4th, 2009 at 07:55pm
  • xThnksFrThMmrsx

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    I loved the new chapter!
    I'm sad that it's basically over though. :'(
    But at least I can always go back and read it again! ^-^
    Is there any chance of a sequel?
    June 30th, 2009 at 05:02am
  • dancerbabe365

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    Awe! It's so cute! But I'm kind of sad that this story is going to be over. Possibly a sequel after the epilogue??
    June 29th, 2009 at 11:25pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    : D
    June 29th, 2009 at 04:31pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Awesome.
    June 29th, 2009 at 03:21pm