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  • modern mariah.

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    HAH! I knew Joe had it in him.
    May 13th, 2009 at 11:16am
  • bellabelle

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    oooooo drama

    loved it
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    May 11th, 2009 at 10:34am
  • livexlaughxlovex

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    haha go joe ! lol!
    May 11th, 2009 at 03:17am
  • BreathBeforeTheKiss

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    aw thats terrible =[
    who in their right mind would punch a girl?!?
    loved it =]
    May 10th, 2009 at 11:42pm
  • dancerbabe365

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    Go Joe!!! Whoop whoop!! I'm so glad that someone beat him up!!! Can't wait for more so please update soon!
    May 10th, 2009 at 05:20pm
  • swell

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    Man, I haven't commented this in a while.
    So I'll try to make this long and meaningful.

    Although nothing I say is long and meaningful.
    :D

    Poor K. Damien the dick breaking her crushed little heart.
    Go Joe for beating him up.
    And I just love Nick, because he was THERE.

    eerrr. this wasn't exactly long.

    But it was a GREAT chapter. :D
    May 10th, 2009 at 10:17am
  • KrystiMarie

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    Im not really a big fan of Jonas Sister fanfictions, but I really like this one! =]
    May 7th, 2009 at 04:53am
  • bellabelle

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    aww :)
    it's good she's finally come round
    i hope damien is out of the picture for good and no one got an incriminating shot of 'what happened'

    loved it
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    May 6th, 2009 at 10:54am
  • the apex predator;;

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    JMac = Damien.

    I don't usually read Jonas Sister fics, because they always suck. But this one is pretty good. But yes, the punch seems a bit fake. She would have to get in trouble for that one, the girl would probably sue her. And the other girls wouldn't still be giggling, they'd be shocked.

    Plus you said Frankie was eight in the beginning but in the park chapter you said he was seven.

    And the banners were really good. I miss them.

    I make them, but I'm not too good. Sorry ^^;

    Anyway, this was pretty good. I liked it a lot.
    May 2nd, 2009 at 04:49am
  • lovee;

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    STERLING KNIGHT and OMG MOOOOOOOOORE PLSSSSSSSSSSS I LoVE this
    April 28th, 2009 at 04:01pm
  • fake a smile.

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    uh oh.
    i think kats gonna get madddd.
    and sterling knight all the way. hehe.
    April 24th, 2009 at 03:05pm
  • BreathBeforeTheKiss

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    great chapter kim =]
    i hope they can get through to her!
    April 23rd, 2009 at 05:20am
  • ArielAdrenaline.

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    I really really like this story; it's so good. I loved the punch and how she seemed so innocent when her brothers asked. XD
    (:<3
    April 23rd, 2009 at 02:45am
  • vikingzgrl

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    it depends...
    if Damien cheats on Kat then he should be played by Sterling Knight
    If Damien is truly in love with Kat... he should be played by Jesse McCartney
    April 22nd, 2009 at 04:48pm
  • livexlaughxlovex

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    ^^ I sorta get the same vibe from him as you do. I also think he should be played by Jesse also.

    Just found this story, got to says its pretty amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!
    April 22nd, 2009 at 12:24pm
  • modern mariah.

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    Is it me, or is anyone else getting a stalker vibe from Damien? I really like this story, so please keep up the good work.
    Also, the argument between the fangirl and Katherine seemed a little too fake. Instead of punching her, she should have 'ultimate punch'ed her. (If you've seen Hot Rod, yu know what I'm talking about.
    April 22nd, 2009 at 11:58am
  • BreathBeforeTheKiss

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    oh no... blinded by 'love'. i dont see this ending well...
    cant wait for the next one =]
    April 21st, 2009 at 05:24am
  • ArielAdrenaline.

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    Woo; this is such a good story(:<3
    April 21st, 2009 at 02:07am
  • helpless dreamer;

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    Aww.
    I want Jesse to play Damien.
    April 21st, 2009 at 01:28am
  • tulip;

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    Loved the update :)
    April 19th, 2009 at 10:20am
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