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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! O_O SHE CAN'T BE DEAD! They're immortal right?! They already died! But I hav a feeling they can die again :/ I'm so worried now. You hav to update SOON

Yay! you updated this. I loved the twist at the end. I'd write more, but I'm off to check out your journal ;)

I really hope you keep on writing this. (:
I think it really flows, by the way.

THE LAYOUT IS AMAZING!

Thanks Guys!!

More to come really soon...hopefully!! XD

PURE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND YAY!!!! AVA IN ACTION!!!! I LIKED THE WAY AVA WAS DISCRIBED IN THIS CHAPTER!!!

Yay Updated!!!! I loved it. I love the fighting scenes and the hints at Ava's background. I want to know more. I couldn't really figure much out and I really want to know whats going on btween her and Ravador :o (scandalous) Can't wait for more ^.^ Luv the story

Ah... now I have some good news.

I SHOULD be able to update this one soon.
PM is catching up, FINALLY, and I have HUGE plans for all the stories...

So please keep reading!!
... I did update PM today... read that too!!

~K

I like this story. I wouldn't mind a few updates >.>
I like how it tied in with PM there. I'm really curious wuts going to happen next. You really can't just leave it there <.<
Gahhh!! Now I have nothing to read and it ended right there like that! I think this is going to be really sad. I could be wrong tho, right? I need some patients or an update lol either one

Thank you vewwy vewwy much!! XD

Ooo, I like this!
I had it subscribed for ages and this is the first chance I've actually had to read it!
It's really captivating, and I can imagine everything.
Keep it up, and update soon xD

Ahh! this is getting really exciting! I can't wait for more:D

HEY!! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!

YOU, YOUNG LADY NEED TO UPDATE YOUR STORIES!!! GAWD!!
IT'S GETTING SO GOOD RIGHT NOW AND YOU'RE LEAVING ME HANGING!!
WHAT KIND OF SISTER ARE YOU?!

HAHAHA... UPDATE!!

YAY!!
Thanks!! I appreciate it!!

Oh, lol. The whole layout thing... you'll see how the dark theme has to do with the story. =D

I don't really have anything negative to say about this, other than the fact that you don't have to outline what they're saying, it get's kinda confusing, and that it's unnessecary to use double exclamation signs.

Other than that, this was great! I really liked the layout, I must say, though that hasn't anything to do with the story.

When I read this, I got the feeling it was all happening in a dark world, y'know, that there wasn't much happiness there. You soon got an idea of what the characters were like without talking much about them, and it makes me wonder what really is wrong with her little sister. And that mother seems evil, and certainly unstable. I didn't like her:D It's all very exciting.
And original, not to forget that one. The only thing I worry about, is if it's going to look too much like Ghost Whisperer. But it's too early to tell, really, so I'll have to read on.

All in all, this story was really good. Seriously. You are obviously a good writer.
I'll subscribe;)