Rum and Coke - Comments

Poor Ellie! Her behavoir is explainable but not justifiable. She doesn't even try to realize how bad her friends and relatives are taking it. By relatives I mean Kale and Jared. And the board of directors are being assholes, how could they ask something like this right after the death of her mother, so insensitive. I guess it's always all about money. Can't wait for the next one!

Bailey is brilliant! Her little speech was amazing. :D This chapter gives hope even to real people like me, swear. :]

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Matt knowsssss! I can't believe Brian forgot Danni! Bad Brian! Bad, bad Brian! Ellie nooo! You musn't die! It's a no no! lol. You have things to do, things to discover, people to meet, people to uncover, people to piss off... coughbriancough. XD

Loveeed! :D

Poor Matt he's the only one that knows the truth and has to carry the burden of keeping it a secret. Poor Brian and poor Michelle. Brian because he never got to marry his one true love and Michelle because she deserves better than he can give her. I am loving Kay - girl has spunk! Aw Ellie had a panic attack. It's no wonder after what she's been through recently. I can't wait until they meet again and realize they are related. It's going to be awesome, because this time I'll find out what happens in the end!

GOD DOMANIT! you update to slowly! need more! I am dying to get where we left off! hurry up!

<3<3<3

NEUUU! ELLI'S MUSN'T QUITE THE BAND! SHe must not! She's brilliant!

... SEE BRIAN?! DANNI'S EYES! :D

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excuse my caps. :tehe: I am just so in love with this story. :tehe:

AHHH! :D

DANNI'S EYES! :D

And again you amaze me with the power of leaving me begging for more! I loved it. Brian is being a stingy, annoying, self-absorbed old man. I can't wait until the next chapter! It's going great so far!

FINALLY!
enter synyster gates!
god i'v been waiting for this

He ain’t my father and he never will be!

I can’t even fathom what kind of a bitch you came from!

Ah the bitter irony! Poor Ellie, everything reminds her of her mom. She needs to get away and nobody seems to understand that. I absolutely love that part. It's the most hilariously sad thing I've ever read! I can't wait to find out how things go next!

wieee they've met! Oh my god, how will he react when he remembers where he's seen those eyes before...

More more more :: Please <3

Yay! He is back! Wohooooo <3

This story is the best. I reread it all over again xD hahaha

I hope you have time to update soon!

BRIAN! AHH! HE'S BAAAACK! :D

LOVED! <3

DANNIIIIIIIIII! D:

*tears*

Now Ellie's goin' through a rough patch. Ouch. Hurts baaad. :[
Great update though! Amazing! It brought tears to my eyes, you write wonderfully. :]

I love love love love your story!!!!! Im sorry that I haven't commented in awhile! I like what you have done with the story. The original was really good but I think that this one is better in a way! And I want to thank you for being an amazing friend/sister/twinie!!!!!! I love you and will try my hardest to comment more often!!!!! *HUGZ*

Yes! You're keeping the NY scene, aren't you? I'm so glad you are. It was absolutely hilarious!I really can't wait until they meet. I also like that Brian practically hates his current life. And of course the fact that he dreams of Danni all the time. At first I thought it was Michelle, but alas, it was only a fantasy about his true love. About his child being a boy, oh how wrong can he be. What I'm most surprised is Matt's silence. I would have thought he would try to help Danni in some way despite her awful stubbornness. When Brian finds out she's dead, he'll be crushed, poor guy. I can't wait for the next one!

I didn't mind in the least! Actually getting the second e-mail kind of made my day! Thank you!

Ellie thinks she needs to grow up but growing up right now will be too early for her. She blames herself the most. I wish she wouldn't becausing losing a childhood is the most awful thing that could happen to someone like her. Let's hope she channels her regret and guilt into something positive!

So by her father, Kale meant Adam. I don't know why I though otherwise, I mean don't think Kale would betray Danni's trust even after her death by revealing her secret to the man who broke her heart. I feel like Ellie still doesn't completely realize that her mother's gone, at least she wants to deny it as long as possible. I can't wait until Ellie sets off to fulfill her dream of being in a band. I really want them to meet. Like the last time when they met in New York and she punched him. That was beyond hilarious! Can't wait, but you already knew that!

Hey! No problem! I really enjoy commenting to this story! It's one of my absolute favorites. Poor Mark though, I can only imagine Ellie's pain, but like Kale said, she just using him to forget. I don't think she realized that Kale told her that her dad is going to be there. I don't think she wanted to understand, she just didn't care at that point, because her last words to her mother had been awful just because she wanted to find out about her father even though he was never in her life. Oh well, when she sees who it actually is at the funeral...well it'll give her a shock, I hope she doesn't faint or cause some major scene by trying to beat him up. Her mother, although a coward, deserves a peaceful send-off. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

LE GASP! :O Danni's going to die again. T_T
Loved the update! Hey, it's still great, trust me. :D I am totally in love with this story. :]