Rum and Coke - Comments

ButterflyWarmth:

Oh no! You killed her again! Seriously every time i get my hopes up and you crush them! Haha, but yeah, I'm so sad she died, I really hoped that she would live so her and Brian have a chance of getting back together, i know he loved her with all of his heart. Ellie's reaction was so calm almost eerie. Maybe the reality hadn't set in yet. Her last words were so sarcastic, as if she was mocking her dead mother. It was awesome and I can't wait to find out more!

Sorry I keep dashing your hopes, but I can't give away what's already written and what pushes the plot along. Anyways, thanks for commenting and all that jazz. Your comments and thoughts always bring a smile to my face

=D Bree

Oh no! You killed her again! Seriously every time i get my hopes up and you crush them! Haha, but yeah, I'm so sad she died, I really hoped that she would live so her and Brian have a chance of getting back together, i know he loved her with all of his heart. Ellie's reaction was so calm almost eerie. Maybe the reality hadn't set in yet. Her last words were so sarcastic, as if she was mocking her dead mother. It was awesome and I can't wait to find out more!

You gave her a heart attack, didn't you?! Oh how awful that is, are you going to leave her in a coma this time, instead of killing her? Oh I hope so because then there would be a chance of her waking up! And then maybe Brian will speak to her while she's out and she'll wake up and they will live happily ever after! Okay sorry I went off thinking too much... If only things were that easy! Anyways I loved it and I'm glad that you decided to change it, although I did like the version before too. Can't wait for the next chapter!

AMAZING! lol. Loved the updates. Ohh, Ellie has fawesome comebacks. XD

I really love how their name when connected is Danielle. It makes my name feel fawesome. lol. Anyway, loved! XD

Hey, it's me again! I just read the update and some things are becoming a little clearer. Like Bailey's father being in the military. I wish he doesn't have to die, and maybe with the changes you make he won't but still... I hope Ryan returns to normal soon. I feel like Ellie is the only one who can help him.

I also read the author's comments part and I really want to thank you for mentioning me! I really love this story and I'm proud to be its number one fan!

Wow, third comment in a row and I think the pink is becoming a little obnoxious too...

How can people not comment??!! Seriously! You need the 10 stars this story deserves.

I'm sorry I've been out for a while. I don't have any Internet here in the mountains, but I found a Starbucks close to our cabin.

I'm so happy nothing too bad has happened yet. (Actually I'm hoping it never will, but oh well) Poor Ryan! I'm so sad things like that happened to him. Now his life is so messed up, I really don't blame him for sleeping around and getting drunk. I do hope that he will once again sing and dance and be happy, but for some people it's hard to let go.

Ellie is not any closer to finding out about her father because her mother is stubborn as fuck! Danni doesn't understand that Ellie aill be okay even knowing the truth. Yeah she might be mad at her for a while, but at least a part of her won't be missing.

I can't wait to find out what happens next, although I have no idea when I'll be able to read it if not for another week or so when I return back home.

Aww. Such a sweet chapter. :] Loves it so much. :D

Can't wait fer more. You're an amazing writer. <3

Ohhhhh. Dang, why Ryan - whyyyyyyy?! And drama ensues.

LOVED IT! :D

More soon? :] You so deserve more stars, love. :]

It wans't boring at all. :D It was sweet. :]

Loved it! :D

LE GASP!
I wonder if Ellie heard the conversation or something? :D

I always loved the mother-daughter names. They spell my name. lol. XD

AMAZING! LOVE IT! :D

Okay so is this where things start going differently? I hope so I can't wait to see the change. Although I really want to read the old one again, just because I think it was also really good. Is there any way I can get my hands on it? Anyways I love and at the same time hate how stubborn Danni is. It's one of her biggest faults. Other than that I am dying to find out under what circumstances Ellie is going to meet her real father. Is Brian going to be the cranky old bastard he was in the old version or is he going to be nice? Well I guess that depends on a lot of things like his family life and his smoking addiction. Haha. Can't wait for more!

yay! deviation!

I LOVE this story!!!! Actually talking to Bailey, Ryan, and Mark is definitely a ton of fun and I am glad that I am friends with them! =) btw ... u r a great writer twinie!

oh-oh, I feel like IT is coming soon. I'm very nervous.

So Ellie does like Syn Gates. I hoped she would. It's ironic how what she drew on the paper is actually true. Sad though. I hope Danni doesn't die, please! She just has to meet Brian again.

I loved your elaboration on the war in Iraq, definitely sounds like it will continue forever. Let's hope Obama is competent enough to pull the troops out, maybe slowly but steadily.

Yes! I wonder who she will choose that will somehow lead her to Brian. I mean does she still like his band? I don't think it's mentioned yet. I hope she meets him soon. Anyways, great so far. I can't wait for more!

if she chooses Haner I'll laugh my ass off.

Oh, I do hope Danni doesn't die this time. I was so sad when that happened. :[
But you have a really good plot! XD Keep it up. :D

Aww. What a sweet mother/daughter moment. :] I'm so glad this is back. XD Thank you, thank you! XD

I can't believe how stupid I am! I actually unsubscribed from it somehow. I was wondering why I wasn't getting the e-mails that make my day! Anyways, I love it so far. The beginning is a lot different then before, but at the same time, similar to it. I really like it and truly can't wait to read more! I really want to find out how else you'll change it. I hope you won't kill Danni again....