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  • jetblackhotelmirror

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    Ha AWWww that was really cute Nina (did i guess right who it was?!) And I absolutely love the 'splash of sprite after drinking Coke for so long'!!

    I am making my way back and trying to catch up on everything. I'm not all the way done w/the sickness but it's gettin there. Wanna hear the story? I'll tell it after this. It's amusing. But on top of being sick, I've had major issues w/la boyfriend. MAJOR. As in I had to break up with him last night :( We've only been dating since May 20th but for us it was a near love at first sight. Wanna hear how we met? I'll tell that story someday too. It's cute. But anyway, there's a lot behind Mr Assity as I like to refer to him as, but he just has been the biggest douchebag to me...but we talked about it last night and he pretty much begged for a 2nd chance...I'm giving it to him so we'll see how it goes. I'm taking a few days off for myself tho. And I miss him already :P

    So yea, life kinda has been crazyily hittin me hard lately. I do so apologize and I hope to get the ball rollin wicked soon!

    The story of the mysterious illness:
    Long and short of it...I didn't eat for a week n a half cuz my throat was so damn swollen and eventually I couldn't even swallow my own saliva. It was way bad. I was so damn dehyrdated and malnurished that I figured that when I finally DID go in to get it checked, that they'd send me to the hospital for an IV (not a nice thought) And yea, I don't go into the dr at all...last time i went in I was 11 and it was only after I was doubling over in pain then too lol But yea I was lookin like Jeff Dunham's character thing Achmed (don't know who it is...look it up. SILENCE! I KILL YOU! hehe) Anyway, yea I was lookin bad. Turns out I lost between 10 and 15 lbs in those 2 weeks. (made swimsuit shopping easier! lol)
    SO I go in...my bf thinks it's mono...my bro thinks it's a severe case of strep (i've had strep so many dang times, but never this bad!) and well...it wasn't strep A or B and the results for C wouldn't come in for awhile. Then they wanted to do the mono test. Mono test is a blood test. And if it did turn o ut to be mono, the best they could give me would be steroids to try and take the swelling down and that's it. I do NOT do the whole taking blood thing. I have an issue with blood. SOO...I said no to it. The Dr pretty much knew I was being smart about it too. 1-I don't have ins and that would been pricy. 2-If I don't do it then he can at least give me a lesser antibiotic, because they can't give amoxycylin like they usually do cuz if it wasn't strep then i'd get this wicked horrible sunburn like rash all over and be hospitalized. So yay-gave me antibiotic! And they gave me a steroid. (hey, that just sounds awesome.) I finally got more than 3hrs of sleep at a time...and w/in 6hrs my throat finally opened enuf that I could drink water. W/in a couple days I could FINALLY eat something!! And I didn't have an appetitite. ha! Funny stuff....anyway then I call back for results a few days later and they tell me to stop the antibiotic (which drs really usually NEVER do...) and i had to buy these 58$ throat lozenges I have to suck on 5 times a day for 2 weeks (yea...i am horrible at it, especially w/my weird 3rd shift hrs...so i havent been faithful...) cuz they found yeast in my throat. It wasn't strep C. They don't know what illness I actually had/have and told me that i needed to go in again but I can't afford that so hey...as long as this clears it up I'm all happy. SO yea....it's the mystery disease. Am I surprised? No. Nothing can just be normal w/me lol

    So yea. Long story...but that's the craziness. It actually wasn't until end of last week that I finally got a good nights sleep.
    Oh and wanna lose 10-15lbs FAST?! Get the mystery disease!!
    1 Don't eat for 2 weeks
    2 Only drink ice water for a week. And eat an ice cream cone a day. (yea i was making Cold Stone, Briq's, and Dairy Queen VERY happy businesses lol my bf didn't mind cuz i usually bought him ice cream too lol)
    3 After that week is done, only get to drink a couple ounces of water a day. (i had to carry a spit cup cuz i couldnt swallow hahaha it was gross...)

    wa la!!!

    I should add that the bf was oh so amazing (w/exception of getting 2 fights out of me when i was REALLY sick...still dont get that...) through it all. He went out and got me meds or got me ice cream or gave me back massages or in the beginning he would make me soup etc He would make sure i had ice...he even dealt with my AWESOME drooling! hahah I would suck on cherry lozenges and wow...his pillow was then polka dotted (gross?! uh huh. i had to share that.) He dealt with me looking like I was near death too. I have to keep that in mind on the bad days with him.

    Okay this is long enough. Overly long. But I thought I'd share. I'll reward you guys QUITE soon in the sequel!!!!

    Love Love!!
    Hope you guys are doing as amazing as an ant hill near a picnic table full of little kids. :)<3
    July 10th, 2009 at 06:36am
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    Internet crashes suck. Major big time. Where are you Jaeee?!
    Anyways. For the rest of the stories, I think that if you are really love sick and it is your true destiny to meet your soulmate by searching coffeeshops or whatever, I would act like Alex too. He really wants to find Corie because she was something different, a splash of sprite after drinking Coke for so long!

    And no words can seriously tell how we love the story. None, but I will make this comment. Having Alex find her in a coffee shop that just so happens to be in his birth country after giving up on looking for her is the best thing ever!
    July 10th, 2009 at 02:53am
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    Eiggghhttttt :]

    Corie is way too stubborn for her own good! I think that its kinda sad that Corie had to grow up wayyyy too fast for her own good, because well that's just not good for anyone. I mean when a kid matures fast and they grow up, not knowing the fun things in life -- they end up just like, well Corie or like Britney Spears. But Britney Spears is making an amazing comeback so... I have no idea what my point was but oh well. There was a point in my head.

    And I know these aren't as long as the other reviews we have given you, but lately we've been getting home really late annnd yeah. D:

    ♥ Nina (:
    June 27th, 2009 at 07:26am
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    Its not our fault that we get grounded so much! Okay maybe it is, but still!
    Wow. Rish can be deep. I wonder how she's supposedly failing English. Haha so we just finished the WHOLE ENTIRE STORY! (Celebrate good times come on!) But the problem is that its twelve already where we live, so we'll try and get as much feedback about it.

    Chapter Six! <3
    Corie is... haha Hopeless in that chapter. Well, she's not really hopeless, its just the way she acts is kinda funny. And can I say obsessed? LOLOLOL! Kidding! I love how realistic you made it! Because the events happening are true. Fans freak out whenever they see a new girl with Alex or something's a miss with the band.
    And Jaynie (haha Jay = Jae ;; RYHME!) is just like Rish and I's relationship, we finis each other's thoughts and she's always there for me, just like Jaynie is always there for Corie -- but I found our characters again! Haha. Nice reference to Jasey Rae by the way with the name. Or atleast I thought it was a reference. So if its not I deeply apologize!

    OHMYGOODNESS! Jae I love you so much right now! You totally got me and Rish cracking up at how you captured our personalities! Or..wait yeah! We always blame each other and it usually is her who starts the trouble. By the way she's hitting me right now. Meanie Butt

    "Uh huh."

    "You're living in a fan-fic."

    "We all are!"

    "Except it's more like fan-non-fic." Norah smirked at Corie.


    If there was an emoticon of stomachs hurting from laughing. It would go here.

    Chapter Seven!

    I kinda feel bad for Alex, I mean there he is on the bus that travels all around the country, trying soo hard to find her, and there Corie is in her home being all stubborn while he is just. I can't even find the words for it!

    And Jack was...unbelievably observant in this chapter. It's amazing!

    And I would write more, but I can't think right now. My brain totally fell asleep on me :<
    I'll edit this later.
    June 22nd, 2009 at 08:44am
  • jetblackhotelmirror

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    And what I've noticed is that while Rosie is more What If's and what could have beens, but, Corie is more like Probably this and that and the what will happen. She may not say that word but its implied. She's more focused on the future, while Rosie was more kinda stuck in the present and past? I don't know that's the vibe I'm feeling. It might not be right though. And they both think they're being rational at some point, but in all reality. They're not which I find is quite funny. And they're both kidna negative! Like negative thoughts!

    You just made amazing comparisons that I didn't even really see! You are very right! Especially the past and future aspects. And I do love that they're thinking they're being rational...but they're not...in a way? Ha. Lessons to be learned.
    But it's so not over w/the 'supposed rational' thought. The sequel brings more hesitation etc. But differently.
    I was hoping to differentiate the two girls Corie and Rosy...and you really did hit it on the head of how they're different...i didn't even see it. Sorry-im still amazed lol

    The interview is an actual interview that my friend showed me (the one Jaynie is based on) and I think I actually did have a similar convo w/her too. Cuz oddly enough...I'm not an Alex Gaskarth fan in the way that i have any sort of crush on him. lol He's just fun to write about.
    As was Jack for this story. I can't wait to write more of him! I really gotta get the sequel done...i know i know.
    And YES there is still a sequel in the works for MHWSA. I have a few chapters done and it really shouldn't take too long.

    I did miss that about MHWSA...the lack of Alex POVs...i dont know as if i'd ever write another story from just one POV again.

    I loved hearing your comments dearie and hope i get to hear more soon you grounded hooligan showgirls!
    --+--AlwaysLoves!--+--
    June 11th, 2009 at 07:07am
  • takawillcry_xX

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    Oh haha, I just read through the post that you made with Nina.
    I was soooo off in my whole comparison with them. Haha.
    Ohhh new boy? DO tell, xD
    May 29th, 2009 at 07:56pm
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    Well I can't type as much as Nina, because she is more observant than me but here's Chapter 2 and Chapter 3, well more of Chapter 4 since Chapter 3 just syas Corie is failing miserably or something along the lines of that.

    He just said in an interview that his Spice Girl name would be 'Slutty Spice'." That us hilarious! As a pig inside an anthill. I mean. Really! Although if he found out we were reading something like this, he would kill us but. (WHATEVER!)

    Another LOL moment.
    "UGH It doesn't matter. PLUS let's go back to that interview. He only listens to mainstream AND the thing he can't live without on tour is his fricken hair straightener. The guy is a walking fashion statement for the preteen 'Emo' epidemic swooping the world."
    Although from what Marilyn told us, I think he stopped doing that whole hair starightening thing. I don't know Nina is the more better informed, and he doesn't listen to all mainstream. Haha. Rish beeee a stalker! LOL Anyways. I think that this chapter was written nicely because its such a big difference from how MHWSA was written. I think Nina already covered how she thinks they're different but I'll just go to the similarities then. In both stories, they are both kinda insecure about being with guys. (Haha! What is up with that?!") And they both lean on a strong someone for help and guidance.
    And what I've noticed is that while Rosie is more What If's and what could have beens, but, Corie is more like Probably this and that and the what will happen. She may not say that word but its implied. She's more focused on the future, while Rosie was more kinda stuck in the present and past? I don't know that's the vibe I'm feeling. It might not be right though. And they both think they're being rational at some point, but in all reality. They're not which I find is quite funny. And they're both kidna negative! Like negative thoughts!

    Chapter 4. First of all. I LA-LA-LA-LOVE that you decided to do Alex's point of view. I mean sure there were parts of it in MHWSA, but it wasn't a full chapter and you really don't know what he's thinking about during the time him and Rosie were seperated. (BTW Nina told me of the possible sequel about that. STOKED!), but in here you get to know exactly how he's feeling. The frustration and the band and wat nots. And I love Jack's character in here, he's being all somewhat being analytical.

    And I have to get off now. Nina is having internet problems right now. My uncle kinda blocked everything that doesn't have anything to do with school until the finals are over. Soo. she be dead from Mibba right now!
    <3 Rish :]
    May 29th, 2009 at 07:55pm
  • jetblackhotelmirror

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    Exciting!!!! I wish I got summers still...
    May 27th, 2009 at 07:05am
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    We got it working! After we found out it was like a service thingy error. xD
    We'll start reading it soon!
    School ends soon so we have alllll summer!
    <3 Nina
    May 27th, 2009 at 03:51am
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    No worries dude!!! Thanks for catchin up!!! I'll be continuing QUITE QUITE soon. God's put some inspiration in my life most recently. :)

    Thanks again dude!
    May 26th, 2009 at 07:21am
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    Dudeeee! Darian feels like a bad person :/ I just caught up on everything! Everythings been so hectic that i've barely kept up with anything and I feel super bad and I'm sorry! And yeah. Haha. It's so amazing even though i've missed like.....all of it. I fail.
    May 26th, 2009 at 05:36am
  • jetblackhotelmirror

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    takawillcry_xX:
    First Chapter
    So basically me and Rish will be commenting back and forth since we got seperated!
    Haha! No not really, they're moving like right next door to us (Awesome!!!) and they have to move sooo ish Nina's turn. Which I think will what Rish say. Bahhh!

    First of all weird thing!
    They actually did give us a bowl of just PURPLE M&M's
    I had purple M & M's today! At the mvie theater! Ohh yeah. One point for me! Woo!

    And Alex Gaskarth speechless is well... actually speechless. (I feel bad for him having his anxiety attack today. :o Have to tell Marilyn to tell him to feel better the little bugger!)

    And this is just so different from My-heart-would-say-amen, but in a good kind of different! I mean there's Rosie who's having trust issues with Alex and they already know each other in the first chapter, but in this chapter it's like Rosie version 0.5 but at the same time not. Get what I mean? I mean. She doesn't really care a thing about Alex Gaskarth in the beginning but at the same time, she has kinda the same attitude as Rosie, well about some things. The other I have not yet read so, mayeb its too early to be comparing them.

    AND! Nike's aren't all that comfortable with me. I tried them on just for the heck of it while we were shopping and mannn. I got blisters! But what Corie was wearing (lol. I'm having a hard time not writing Rosie since I'm so used to writing Rosie!)
    she wore a grey shirt with regular jeans. The only color on her was her bright orange Adidas sneakers
    Orange is a totally awesome color. I have orange chucks. And they're like neony! It's so bright! Haha!

    AND! I found Rish and I's characters! LOL. Norah and Rae! Now I get whatchuu mean when you said I need comments from my Norah and Rae! Wow are me nad her slow! LOLtotheMAXIMUM!
    (I say Ad way too mcuh but who cares!)

    AND! I basically cracked up when you said we still lived with our parents, because the rent is cheap. Haha. I think that when I go to college I basically still would be living with my parents. Ooh I cannot wait for it!

    Also. Corie is so adorable when she realizes its Alex and Alex is in deep! Like point of no return deep. Because he is just to cool to not go deep.

    "Instead he grasped her left hand in his before popping the top off of a Sharpie with his mouth and writing something on her palm." Someone's cocky :]xD

    My favorite line in the entire chapter
    tall skunked hair scrawny ball of perverted energy.
    Classic! And makes me think of our comment talk about April and Jack and big nosed sisters! (sad thing. April doesn't go to Kumon anymore. I miss her! But she's going to the new center! And so will Rish and I!)
    And I love how Corie makes it hard for Alex, because then it'll show her how serious he is and it will also give him time to think about his priorities. I think?

    And Jaynie totally sounds like my other best friend (excluding Rish and Marilyn --they're family. My non family best friend.)

    Absolutely loved the first chapter <3

    With hearts; Nina :]<3
    Alex had an anxiety attack?

    And I love that you compared Rosy and Corie. They are quite alike...and more than likely because I am or was like that...(as of recently I've had a major change due to a boy...hehe In Love he was my 'Alex' in a way...crazy story that I'll prbly msg you with soon!) But yea....while Rosy is jaded and way too analytical and "practical" like Corie, Rosy was more open to just having flings. She didn't believe that love existed...only lust in a way? Corie tho really just wants nothing to do with men. She's content with her mundane normal routine life. Whether it's Cade or Jaynie (based off same person and neat that you have someone like that too!) they really try to be the mirror for the character. And I find that important because friends will always be there and friends see things that you don't.
    I can't wait for you two to read on!! I hope chapter 2 works for you...if it still doesn't next time, I'll try reposting it and see if that works, but so far noone else has complained of it. Cross fingers!
    You two I love writing into characters haha I seriously had so much fun.
    As much fun as I do describing and writing Jack haha!

    I would totally write more, my showgirls, but work is done and sleep is to be had soooon. Thank you both so much for commentage!

    you both rock the hardcoreness out of jack's bra-cladded mic stand. noich!
    May 21st, 2009 at 01:49pm
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    My slinky ran away!:
    D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
    Sequel? I! LOVE! YOU! SO! MUCH! Free cookies!
    YAY free cookies!!!! Thankya! haha Sorry for the lack of updation thus far, but it shall be soooon! Clap
    May 21st, 2009 at 01:41pm
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    i have to say quick like that i thank you for adding my story link in your signature mah showgirls!
    May 19th, 2009 at 01:25pm
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    I just have to let you know-I am not dying on you! The only computer I have access to right now is the one at work (this one) and the keyboard needs to be cleaned cuz some bozo spilled something sticky on it and just left it. So this is taking me forever to type and making my fingers sore. Soooo (the o just got stuck hehe) I have to wait till a new keyboard is found. :( I am not dead tho! OH and my ch2 is working so idk? let me know if you get to read it.
    i hope to reply to all sooooon (happened again ha!)
    May 19th, 2009 at 01:24pm
  • takawillcry_xX

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    Just when Nina and I are allowed to go on. Jae dies on us.
    How convenient!
    xD
    OH. And. Like Nina. I'm also having problem with the second chapter? Whhhyyy?!!!
    May 19th, 2009 at 05:09am
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    Jaaeee it's not loading up the second chapter D:
    Nina is sad. Oh yes Nina is. Nina is talking in thirs person. Rish is getting creeped out.
    <3 Nina

    (PS. ITS STILL NOT LETTING ME SEE IT :<
    Computer fails! :[:<)
    May 18th, 2009 at 07:27am
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    First Chapter
    So basically me and Rish will be commenting back and forth since we got seperated!
    Haha! No not really, they're moving like right next door to us (Awesome!!!) and they have to move sooo ish Nina's turn. Which I think will what Rish say. Bahhh!

    First of all weird thing!
    They actually did give us a bowl of just PURPLE M&M's
    I had purple M & M's today! At the mvie theater! Ohh yeah. One point for me! Woo!

    And Alex Gaskarth speechless is well... actually speechless. (I feel bad for him having his anxiety attack today. :o Have to tell Marilyn to tell him to feel better the little bugger!)

    And this is just so different from My-heart-would-say-amen, but in a good kind of different! I mean there's Rosie who's having trust issues with Alex and they already know each other in the first chapter, but in this chapter it's like Rosie version 0.5 but at the same time not. Get what I mean? I mean. She doesn't really care a thing about Alex Gaskarth in the beginning but at the same time, she has kinda the same attitude as Rosie, well about some things. The other I have not yet read so, mayeb its too early to be comparing them.

    AND! Nike's aren't all that comfortable with me. I tried them on just for the heck of it while we were shopping and mannn. I got blisters! But what Corie was wearing (lol. I'm having a hard time not writing Rosie since I'm so used to writing Rosie!)
    she wore a grey shirt with regular jeans. The only color on her was her bright orange Adidas sneakers
    Orange is a totally awesome color. I have orange chucks. And they're like neony! It's so bright! Haha!

    AND! I found Rish and I's characters! LOL. Norah and Rae! Now I get whatchuu mean when you said I need comments from my Norah and Rae! Wow are me nad her slow! LOLtotheMAXIMUM!
    (I say Ad way too mcuh but who cares!)

    AND! I basically cracked up when you said we still lived with our parents, because the rent is cheap. Haha. I think that when I go to college I basically still would be living with my parents. Ooh I cannot wait for it!

    Also. Corie is so adorable when she realizes its Alex and Alex is in deep! Like point of no return deep. Because he is just to cool to not go deep.

    "Instead he grasped her left hand in his before popping the top off of a Sharpie with his mouth and writing something on her palm." Someone's cocky :]xD

    My favorite line in the entire chapter
    tall skunked hair scrawny ball of perverted energy.
    Classic! And makes me think of our comment talk about April and Jack and big nosed sisters! (sad thing. April doesn't go to Kumon anymore. I miss her! But she's going to the new center! And so will Rish and I!)
    And I love how Corie makes it hard for Alex, because then it'll show her how serious he is and it will also give him time to think about his priorities. I think?

    And Jaynie totally sounds like my other best friend (excluding Rish and Marilyn --they're family. My non family best friend.)

    Absolutely loved the first chapter <3

    With hearts; Nina :]<3
    May 17th, 2009 at 08:04am
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    D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
    Sequel? I! LOVE! YOU! SO! MUCH! Free cookies!
    May 15th, 2009 at 06:22pm
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    nawwwwwwwwwwwwww!

    -tear

    ahahaha
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    May 15th, 2009 at 01:50pm