We Both Need to Change - Comments

Pipe, brillant, but im kinda dispponted why i cant be with tom, aaaaaaaah... haha, well i agree with you a hundred percent, he has adorable eyes.

lol i'm in the authors note woowwwww amazing of you XD heehheheecurtis and me kissing WOOOT lovely chapter babes! ily soo bloody much heheehhhe dougie as a teacher HEHHEHEHEEH omg i cna't stop I should stop laughing now XD mcfly lyrics yay ilyilymore than Oli

lol
kinda was a suckish chapter but ehh I lthik anyone would like a cake made by oli's mum and himself with tom XD hahahaha not my kind XD

Aw! Three and four are adorable chapters! :D :D

YAY! i like this story
and I also like the fact that it started in new jersey!
because thats where I live!
even if it kinda smells....
^_^

oh shiii this is actually really addictive so far! The chapters are nice and long and you portray your characters accurately and realistically.
also, "’Cause yeh’re a fuckin’ nutter and nutters forget ‘vrythin’ ‘bout ‘emselves includin’ the fact that they’re a nutter" that made me lol. :D

hhehehee lovely bytheway hehehe CAKE omg oli is mean I'm siure those weren't birrds their E V I L lol love this story I love you too Happy easter love

p.s. YAYY YOU POSTED YOUR FIRST STORY!

Hmm this is not bad so far! Good start.
Okay, one complain: don't end sentences with "so yeah" cause, idk, it doesn't really flow well? It doesn't sound like a finished sentence.
Other than that...I'm interested to see what those camera clicks were!! creepy haha

AWWWW i likes it lovely omg SYD how dare you comment beofre iXD i'm gonna sursibe to this by far amazing hhehe Oli at a store pshhhh and CURTIS AHHH ily

Even though I have NO idea who the guy is, I like the story. :) It's very good. I can't wait for you to post more!

ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh...
*sing song voice*oli likes her, oli likes her.
and she's playing hard to get, hahahaha!
excelllente.
give me more very VERY soon
(i think you know why haha...)

i don't know why you said it was going to be boring.
i thought it was good actually.
give me more soon(:

heheheh WOOT first to commeent evil daddy he should get a spnkin XD lol lovely story lover! hehehe i wonder how you got the ideal for an oli story *cough* XD can't wait for more!