:O DEVI! I love it! (: No. Seriously. I do! I mean, the plot behind it is amazing. I've heard it before, but still. I know you'll make it different. You always do :D My only concerns would be that the second picture isn't working and the 'C' 'D' 'Z' 'S' stuff is really confusing XD
Can't wait for the next chapter. =]