Road Trip - Comments

LMFAO! He woke up handcuffed to a bed priceless!
Aww the teaser has me highly antisipaticing whats going to happen next!
LOVED the update

I think I love this! Lol
It's sooo well written!
You, my dear, have talent.
Update soonly!

Now, did I mention that I love how this chapter begins? There is nothing like waking up in a private strip club room chained to the bedpost, not remembering what happened the night before. Go, Craig. That must have been one hell of a night. :D Whatever may have happened. I'll try not to think about it.

(Mike says = "Yeah, I remember when this chick from Vegas handcuffed me to my headboard. That was fun.")

And Lucy! She was hilarious. Took it all in stride, finding a hot guy strapped to a bed. I would have been a little more... fascinated. Muaha. Yay for Lucy getting him out though! I think Craig should love Lucy, just saying. Ahem.

Calling Max, calling Max.... I was kind of upset when I first read that he was being weird and snippy-ish. But, when I read why, it kind of made it all better. He kind of had a mini breakdown, the poor, sexy guy. But, I still love him, in the story and out. I'm amazing like that.

Awwwww, they're coming to Tennessee to find me? Damn, that's about as amazing as it gets! I'm going to die during the next chapter. Whoooooa, the hell is going on in the teaser? I didn't read that until just now. Whaaaat? ...

What?

Oh, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love you!! And Mike loves you, too, apparently.

Woo hoo! Red Heads! I feel they don't get enough recognition. . .okay I'm only saying that 'cause I am one. XD Can't wait for the next chapter! <3

LOVED the updates!

I will always fucking love that car. ALWAYS AND FOREVER! I just love it. My dream car, or, at least one of them. If only it actually came with Max Green and Craig Mabbitt. Now THAT would be a car. :D

Aw, Max isn't very happy about it, that's kind of sad. But he'll get used to it. Justin Timberlake is such a dickwad!! That was one of the best sentences in the chapter, for the record. It made me laugh like none other.

...That's a lot of strip clubs. And Max is drooling over women on posters. Nice.

“That you won’t let temptation overtake me, I really wanna save myself for Holly. Got it?” IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES!!!! Awwwwwww, that's just... awwwww! I don't even know a better descriptive word for it.

Max in a kitten mask. Not exactly sexy. But Craig in a tiger mask is kind of sexy. And Animal as the name of a strip club is wonderfullll. Haha.

And, I will forever love the bribe. :D <3

I LOVE YOU!!!

nice update =]

I loved everything about this! Especially the rain pelting down on them at the beginning. Rain and hot, sexy guys always mix. But Max's poor car! I can't believe it broke down! D: That's so sad.

Max thinks there's a mouse in the engine? I love him. But at least they found someone to fix it! Hiii, Chris! I loves you for fixing my man's and Zoe's man's car!!!

And Chris felt sorry for them for the sob story with everyone. :D Who wouldn't?! That's one hell of a sob story! They really don't look old enough to drink, especially Max.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. Max still loves and misses me, and chooses ME over a hot STRIPPER. I love him even more! <3

Yes! Max's love mobile is fixed! It's flashy and new? What happened to his car?! And now I have to wait until the next chapter.

But, it's worth the wait. And this chapter was amazing! I loved everything about it and I will probably read it numerous times after this. :D I love you!

Finally caught up with this again and I LOVE it
Sorry its been forever stuffs come up and schools been kicking my ass

aw that last chapter was so sad! poor max! I can't wait for more updates! Great job! ;)

[I'm typing the comment as I'm reading the update, and I'm pretty sure that this is going to be a funny, wonderful comment. So, enjoy, my darling!]

This chapter started amazingly; it's amazing and emotional three words into it! I'm in love with it already, and, yes, I do not lie. :D And if I do, everyone knows because I absolutely suck at it. So, no, Craig, I was not lying. Hehe.

Jasmine has issues! SHE SLAPPED ME? Beat her ass, Maxie! Oh... no... I'm totally being sacked, aren't I? I've reached the beginning of the actual emotion and sadness, I'm guessing. “What about Holly?” He cried. “I really like her, I actually, felt something for her for once, Craig. I’ve only known her a day but I want more time to get to know her. I don’t wanna throw her away,” That rather hurt my heart.

I WANT TO COME WITH YOUUUUUUUUUUU. I really do. :] “No, Craig. I’m not ruining our best summer ever, that I’m enjoying with my best friend in the whole world, for a girl I’ve only just met. No matter how much I like her,” Oh, that stung.

Aw, yay. My parents in Tennessee, love it. And I even start crying in stories; I'm so emotional. NOOOOO, Max is sobbing? Ah, now I actually do feel like crying! This is soooo sad, you were right!

D: I am being sacked. Aw. This sucks.

“Come on, I need to go now before I go running back to her or I’ll never leave,” and “She is for keeps, isn’t she?” are my favorite sentences, and I started crying a little at the first sentence after the "ten minutes later" thing... Yeah. I'm a weak person.

Oh, wow, Maxie! Rebound, much? Haha. That was a very good chapter, honey! It does not suck. I love it... you know, minus being dumped. :D

this story is really, realy great!! Max cracks me up, haha!!

Did I mention this is my favorite story of all time, on all of Mibba. This freaking rocks, and you're the only person who has ever put me in a story, sooo, yay! I love you!

Oh! So that's the twist... Awwwwwwwwww. Poor Craig! He had his heart broken by a slut. How dare she do that to him; that is soooo sad! (I'm silently hoping that she dumps Julian for Craig, because that is totally what should happen.) And, wow... my best friend sucks. It's going to kill me to wait for the next update to see what happens.

You have captured my personality so well! It's almost frightening, but I love it!

I swear, when I kept making faces at the table, I was so confused! For a second, I thought I was just being a stuck up priss, but, haha. I wasn't. :] On a less serious note, my name is in this fourteen times. Yes, I counted.

I smiled at the note, he must have slept with Holly, or he wouldn’t have put that winking face. Buaha! I slept with Max! That made my entire day, as well as the note.

Oh, and this was my favorite part of the entire chapter: I beg to differ, but Max has been following her around like a lost puppy all day, hanging off her every word. That made me smile. :]

wow! That last chapter was pretty hot! Go Craig! lol haha.....but what about max? What shall we learn about his encounters?

First paragraph = fucking awesome. --by now he'd be seducing six girls at a time behind the dumpters. Haaaa! Dumpster girl. And I love that I can capture Max's attention so well. :] It thrills me to no end.

Did I mention that your way of describing things is amazing? I love it, you are one hell of a writer, just saying! ...And your kissing scenes put mine to shame! Ah, so jealous. Jäger would usually be my Viagra. Possibly the best sentence I've ever read. :D Oh, Craig. I love you.

OH MY GOD, SEX ON THE BEACH! I almost died, right then, right there, as soon as I read Craig saying "beach". And, whenever I get around to writing a sex scene for my stories, I doubt it will be as hot as this one. This is... wonderful. Best sex in an Escape the Fate fan fiction, hands over. You should be proud of yourself!

Yay, Craig finally got laid! Fucking awesome!!!! :D

Anyway, best chapter yet. I looooved it, and I love the teaser.

She stole my name! :( I read the last chapter but I'm not sure I've read the rest of the story. Hmm... I think you might have showed it me when you were mine last...
I liked what I read anyway :P Although I'm not an ETF fan, but w/e!

I'm writing this comment as I'm reading the update.

I love the list of things that Max loves in girls. That was FUN. :] "I believe in Jagermeister!" Ah, you used it before me! But that's okay. Hehe. That was awesome.

Jasmine Garret is amazing! And Craig has the hots for that chick, because she sounds extremely sexy. Just saying. OH MY GOD, DID YOU JUST PUT ME IN THIS CHAPTER?! HOLY CRAP. HOLY CRAP. I FUCKING LOVE YOU, ZOE! ....And now I crashed.

The picture you linked to is fine!!! And you pretty much got me downpat. :] In fact, you make me sound sexyyyy. Something that I think is kind of hard to do. And you even made me act like me, with the giggling and the clapping. I love it. :]

All in all, this was the best chapter yet. And not just because I'm in it either. ^.~ It's really amazing!

ahahaha!!! Tourists are funny! :)

Of course, I cannot wait until the next chapter. Bar hopping, Max and Craig, and Atlantic City. It shall be the most amazing thing ever, just saying. :]]

And the teaser is awesome! CANNOT WAIT FOR THAAAAAT. The girl sounds super sexy and Craig should definitely get some from her. Go, Craigafer!

that wasn't boring it was amusing!
loved it