First off, I love the idea. It's so original. I especially love the first story, because it's portrayed to be so...realistic, even if the idea itself isn't really, well, possible. I think you are doing an amazing job on this, and the way you can write 1,000 words (or thereabouts) on a picture truly amazes me. It's very good, and, unlike a regular story, you don't have to read every single entry in order to know what's going on, and I like that. It's truly a beautiful idea. Keep it up! :D
omg i absolutley love it. it was creative and inspiring. i love people who think outside the box and if anyone wanted to ban this they are really very pitiful and are probably just jealous! will you please continue?
So beautiful! The ending was wonderful... sad endings are my favourites. Especially this one, because it was more bittersweet than completely sad. Nicely done.
This update was beautiful. I was shocked when I got the email saying you updated... but it was a good kind of shock.
I really hope you don't get banned. You're an incredible writer, which this site needs more of. If you get banned because of the organization of your stories while others get to stay on the site with horrible grammar/overused plot lines, it will be a huge shame.
Sorry if none of this makes sense. I couldn't sleep, so I'm on here.
Anyways.
As I said, I loved this. I think my favourite line was The knife was the worst part of it, and the part he enjoyed most. It slashed and sliced into my skin meticulously, sending waterfalls of red spewing from my veins. I don't know why. And he was so beyond twisted it actually kind of made me sick, which almost never happens.
Ok, so since I JUST stumvled upon this, this may be a bit long. I hope you don't mind.
The Waterfall: So beautiful. So... different. I like how unfazed the father is about the window. Amazing.
Finding Your Calling: I love this. I feel this way when I'm acting on stage. I completely understand what you mean.
The Key to My Heart: So incredibly sweet. (And I REALLY wanna eat that cupcake!)
Fair Warning: Oh wow. My heart clenched when the killer called Penelope. Amazing. (Only complaint: the link to the picture is broken. But that's ok.)
Poison Apples: I really loved this. The way you desrcibe their relationship and everything... and the last line was cute! So no worries there :)
Overall, good job. It always bugged me when people put all of their one shots in the same story, but I like this a lot, since they are essentially related. It's such an amazing idea. :)