Leaving My Fingerprints - Comments

oh my god. That was so emotional! it was amazing, but so sad. It really shows that you write from and not about. Its beautiful! :)

Your a great writer.
My teacher would love you.
"A great writer always makes the reader emotional.
Weather Sad, happy, angry, or crying. It shows a sign of a good author."
So I did cry, this was amazing.
What really got to me was the song, because I believed you were going to put eternity
But you didnt and thats what hit me the most.
This story is amazing.
<3

I love this story so much. It is truely amazing. This is the first story i have ever cried to. :)

Devi. I am crying so bad that I can barley type. You are SO mean for making us cry so much.Jk. That is so sad though. Poor Nick. I love this story.

wow.
devi this has been one of the greatest stories that i have ever read.
you should be totally proud of it.
I started to tear up alot when Nick started punching Joe. I could seriously imagine it all happening, and then when Nick was singing... wow.
amazing.
extremely sad.
but amazing.

Oh my, this story was so good!
I love it so much!
I cried like a baby whilst reading the epilogue
This was so great

ahh.

:[ i was this close to tears. |-| THAT CLOSE.

...this was truly one of the most amazing stories i have ever read.

That first sentence did me in. I didn't cry, but I really wanted to. Why Devi? WHY?!

Did you know that every finished story of yours has a death at the end?
WCCTW & WCCIIWT - Danielle
GIACFOLTS - Tinsley
INAPTAAF - Troy
And I believe there was another story with a girl who dies at the end. I forgot how. But It was Nick story.

I'm not going to read your stories anymore.
...
;)

i hate that she died.
:(
my heart hurts.

poor babies [nick and maxie].
i'm glad you didn't write her death scene, or I would've cried my eyes out.

OMG Devi
This has to have been one of your best stories, ever.
I loved it and yes the ending did make me cry, but I knew she wouldn't survive.
Love, your number one groupie.
=)

Thank you for not going with the "miracle" ending, it would have disgraced this story. You did a beautiful job with this one, it had emotion, real emotion not that stupid mellow-dramatic emotion that sucks. I loved how you ended with a song, black keys really did fit with the story and that's what made me cry the hardest, because I could see exactly how that fit Maxie. But yeah, it was good that you didn't go with the "and she was healed by a miracle" ending.

Awh, poor Nick.
Amazing story, i'll miss it.
: ( : )

I loved how you ended the story with them singing (:
It was gorgeous.

oh my GOSH
that was sooooooooooo sososooso beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I cried TWICE!! That was the most amazing ending, anyone could have thought of for that story!!

oh

my

gherkins.

that was truely the most brilliant, touching, heart felt way to end this brilliant story!!
I'm at a loss for words.

My favourite part?? was probably when either Demi found out about it or when Nick came after her. . . . . . or just the whole story was my faviourite part. =)
what i hated?? that this story had to end. =)

seriously your truely amazing in the way you write!!!!!

I am now officially going to read all your other stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOOP WOOP
keep up the awesome work!!

That...was quite possibly one of the most beautiful and moving endings to a story I have read on here or anywhere else. It was done so eloquently, and yet it wasn't overbearing or overwhelming and wordy. I teared up so badly at the end. Black Keys is one of my favorite songs for sure on LVATT.

I think my favorite part of this whole story was Joe trying to get Nick to finally break. Not because I'm a sadist haha but because it was such a powerful scene.

AMAZING JOB. Seriously. Every word of praise and commendation you get for this story you deserve! Cannot wait to read more of your work! Keep it up!

Oh my gosh! I'm at my boyfriend's house and I'm crying my eyes out. And he's wondering why I'm crying and I don't wanna show him me crying over Nick and his dead girlfriend. Haha.

Omg, I balled through the whole last chapter and epilogue. I suck when it comes to sad stories, I have to have a box of tissues by my side! It's so sad it's done! But, ill keep reading your stories! Ttyl, Lauren.

awww so sad :]