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  • Charlie..

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    Ok, so that was one of those moments where you listen to a sad song and just cry.
    Even if you know it's not real, you still cry, because it was beatutiful and it felt like it was real.
    This story was absolutley amazing.
    The songs I was listening to;
    Breathe Me by Sia;Time for me to fly by The Jonas Brothers;and I will follow you into the dark by Death Cab for Cutie
    August 1st, 2009 at 11:11pm
  • DrowningImagination

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    Awwww, Devi!!!
    That was so sad. But it was a very great story. I loved every part of it. That was a perfect ending, even though it was insanely sad.
    xoxo
    August 1st, 2009 at 10:53pm
  • spoonerisms

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    Awwwww.

    That was so sad.
    There are tears in my eyes.
    Nick's speech was really great and I can't believe that HE BEAT JOE UP?!
    But Joe knew what he was doing... I think. haha.

    OH MY GOSH. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER. ):
    August 1st, 2009 at 10:53pm
  • danimals owns

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    Shit! I cried.
    I love crying, but I really like happy endings, and this wasn't a happy ending. I knew she wasn't going to get better, but I still hadn't accepted that she was going to die.
    Nonetheless, this was a fantastic story. You're are an amazing writer and I wish you the best with everything you do. Keep it up.
    August 1st, 2009 at 09:48pm
  • lyrical.lullaby

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    fabulous. the only thing i want to know is what ever happened between emma and nick. how did she take the whole her boyfriend leaving her for her best friend/ her bestfriend dying?
    August 1st, 2009 at 09:45pm
  • soccerchick1656

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    I really liked the ending! I cried :[
    August 1st, 2009 at 09:44pm
  • MidnightMassacre ;;

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    This is the best story i have ever read! Honestly!
    You made me cry and no story ever does that to me!
    I completely loved it!
    Congrats on an AMAZING story!
    xx,
    Robyn !! <3
    August 1st, 2009 at 09:12pm
  • LeaveThisTown

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    This was really an amazing story
    Your writing was excellent and consistent through the story, and the plot line was brilliant. You gave a lot of emotion when it came to your characters and it was obvious that you actually cared about the quality of your work. And for that, it came out fantastic.
    I did cry, at the end. Not going to lie haha.
    The only criticism I have, and this is just a hiccup, is that the time line for this story was a bit weird. Sometimes single events, like the sleepover, would take 3 or 4 chapters and other times weeks would go by between two chapters. I realize thats necessary to fully explain and play out a situation, but for me, it was slightly confusing to keep track.
    But over all, it was an amazing, AMAZING, story. I'm sad to see it go but I'm excited to see where you take your other stories. =]
    August 1st, 2009 at 08:49pm
  • keepthislovealive

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    oh my gooooooshhh, deviiiii.
    in the beginning. sadness. nick all emotionless and such.
    i was tearing up at nick's speech. MORE SADNESS.
    and then when nick started hitting joe, but joe didn't stop him because he knew he had to let him... i kinda wanted to cryyyy. =\
    and then holy frickin' crap, black keys! and they just played and sang, and then nick was like he would see the world for her...
    all in all, it was pretty much a load of amazingness, just like this whole storyy.
    August 1st, 2009 at 08:46pm
  • LookUpAtTheStars.

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    This story is one of your finest! :)
    i loved it!
    August 1st, 2009 at 08:00pm
  • Somebody.To.Love.Me

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    this was soooooooooo sad buh wel written ive luvd every part of it especially the cliff hangers and all the tension!
    August 1st, 2009 at 07:12pm
  • unbroken13

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    I'm going to have to say that is the best story I have ever read.
    I cried. (a lot) You're a great writer!
    August 1st, 2009 at 07:01pm
  • ShuperGurl143

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    I cried so FUCKING hard... it was very beautiful... I loved it
    August 1st, 2009 at 06:22pm
  • weshouldgetjerseys.

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    I don't even know what to say.
    This story is incredible.
    I absolutely love this story.
    I teared up at the end, hahah.
    I just LOVE this story. <3
    August 1st, 2009 at 06:08pm
  • maddyann

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    This was an amazing story. I think the epilouge really did it. It was hard to not try to cry. It was a beautiful story. :D
    August 1st, 2009 at 05:25pm
  • The Great View

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    AHHH it's done! haha

    i TRIED SO HARD not to cry
    you know like a challange :P haha

    I LOST! haha i cried :) it was good.
    August 1st, 2009 at 05:22pm
  • steph959

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    wow, i read the epilogue and i actually hadnt heard that song.
    so i searched it on youtube and heard it while reading and man, it made me cry like crazy.
    your story was amazingggg.

    my favorite part had to be the ending i guess. i mean i dont say its nice she died and all but omg so much emotion. simply beautiful (:

    *sigh* wow. i have nothing more to say. just wow.
    August 1st, 2009 at 05:10pm
  • sightless.

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    Aw, man! Thanks for making me bawl my eyes out and causing me to have a runny nose, you mean person!
    Gosh, the epilogue was so sad! I was crying right off the bat, knowing that Maxie died and Nick was all mopey and emotionless and such. How could you make us all sad like that? Cry
    Oh my God, and Nick's speech at the funeral just broke me, I started crying right when I stopped, and thought it would be okay. omgno: When he was pretty much beating up Joe, I felt so terrible, but I knew Joe was getting through to Nick so I was all, "Nick, don't hit too hard, he hurts too."
    The ending where Nick's thinking on how he would do everything for the both of them was just... oh man, that really made me feel like a waterfall of tears. That, my friend, was my favorite part of the story, the last two or three sentences.
    I think my least favorite was when Nick's trashing his room, simply because it made me feel so sad for Nick. It was beautifully written... just mighty depressing. Cry
    August 1st, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • in his kiss;

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    that's so sad, I'm like crying :[ this story was amazing, you should publish this story one day :]
    August 1st, 2009 at 04:54pm
  • wonderwall;;

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    Oh my god. :[

    So sad. I'm crying.

    It was awesomely written & you did a great job. :]

    Thanks for the awesome story. :]
    August 1st, 2009 at 04:48pm