Ok, so that was one of those moments where you listen to a sad song and just cry. Even if you know it's not real, you still cry, because it was beatutiful and it felt like it was real. This story was absolutley amazing. The songs I was listening to; Breathe Me by Sia;Time for me to fly by The Jonas Brothers;and I will follow you into the dark by Death Cab for Cutie
Awwww, Devi!!! That was so sad. But it was a very great story. I loved every part of it. That was a perfect ending, even though it was insanely sad. xoxo
That was so sad. There are tears in my eyes. Nick's speech was really great and I can't believe that HE BEAT JOE UP?! But Joe knew what he was doing... I think. haha.
Shit! I cried. I love crying, but I really like happy endings, and this wasn't a happy ending. I knew she wasn't going to get better, but I still hadn't accepted that she was going to die. Nonetheless, this was a fantastic story. You're are an amazing writer and I wish you the best with everything you do. Keep it up.
fabulous. the only thing i want to know is what ever happened between emma and nick. how did she take the whole her boyfriend leaving her for her best friend/ her bestfriend dying?
This is the best story i have ever read! Honestly! You made me cry and no story ever does that to me! I completely loved it! Congrats on an AMAZING story! xx, Robyn !! <3
This was really an amazing story Your writing was excellent and consistent through the story, and the plot line was brilliant. You gave a lot of emotion when it came to your characters and it was obvious that you actually cared about the quality of your work. And for that, it came out fantastic. I did cry, at the end. Not going to lie haha. The only criticism I have, and this is just a hiccup, is that the time line for this story was a bit weird. Sometimes single events, like the sleepover, would take 3 or 4 chapters and other times weeks would go by between two chapters. I realize thats necessary to fully explain and play out a situation, but for me, it was slightly confusing to keep track. But over all, it was an amazing, AMAZING, story. I'm sad to see it go but I'm excited to see where you take your other stories. =]
oh my gooooooshhh, deviiiii. in the beginning. sadness. nick all emotionless and such. i was tearing up at nick's speech. MORE SADNESS. and then when nick started hitting joe, but joe didn't stop him because he knew he had to let him... i kinda wanted to cryyyy. =\ and then holy frickin' crap, black keys! and they just played and sang, and then nick was like he would see the world for her... all in all, it was pretty much a load of amazingness, just like this whole storyy.
wow, i read the epilogue and i actually hadnt heard that song. so i searched it on youtube and heard it while reading and man, it made me cry like crazy. your story was amazingggg.
my favorite part had to be the ending i guess. i mean i dont say its nice she died and all but omg so much emotion. simply beautiful (:
Aw, man! Thanks for making me bawl my eyes out and causing me to have a runny nose, you mean person! Gosh, the epilogue was so sad! I was crying right off the bat, knowing that Maxie died and Nick was all mopey and emotionless and such. How could you make us all sad like that? Oh my God, and Nick's speech at the funeral just broke me, I started crying right when I stopped, and thought it would be okay. omgno: When he was pretty much beating up Joe, I felt so terrible, but I knew Joe was getting through to Nick so I was all, "Nick, don't hit too hard, he hurts too." The ending where Nick's thinking on how he would do everything for the both of them was just... oh man, that really made me feel like a waterfall of tears. That, my friend, was my favorite part of the story, the last two or three sentences. I think my least favorite was when Nick's trashing his room, simply because it made me feel so sad for Nick. It was beautifully written... just mighty depressing.
Even if you know it's not real, you still cry, because it was beatutiful and it felt like it was real.
This story was absolutley amazing.
The songs I was listening to;
Breathe Me by Sia;Time for me to fly by The Jonas Brothers;and I will follow you into the dark by Death Cab for Cutie