Nowhere Man - Comments

this is probably really late, but i just found it and fell in love with it.
i don't even care that it was 4 or so chapters because each chapter was perfect and well detailed, i loved it so much!
and by the way, you have a talent for writing (:

I'm a little late with the commenting, but that's okay since I'm commenting now, and I don't think you care as long as I AM commenting. I love run-ons don't you?

I loved the whole thing. Everyone was portrayed perfectly. Loved it to itty bitty pieces.

And I do have to mention 'Change'. I'm so happy Ryan has his own band. The kid deserves the spotlight for once in his life. And his singing! Wow, it's definitely improved since Pretty.Odd.

I love them and I love the new Panic! (funny how Ian Crawford just can't stand to be away from the FBR bands huh? First The Cab and now filling in for Panic?)

Repeating myself, but it was seriously such a wonderful, little story. It was just the right size and trying to continue it would be disastrous.

<3

I WOULD'VE COMMENTED AND READ AND ALL THREE DAYS AGO, BUT YOU KNOW--DENMARK TURNED OUT TO BE A LAND WITH NO INTERNET. Yeah, okay, lying, they probably have internet overe there, I just couldn't find it in The Middle of the Woods, the Middle of Nowhere, Denmark. *cough* [/ramble about unimportant things].

I haven't heard "Change" yet, but only 'cause I decided I had to read this first--it appeared to be more accurate and important.

And now, let me introduce an incoherent ramble by the (in)famous Victoria Flannel of rainy Norway (this is what happens when you live off of Coke for an entire week, no kidding):

Brendon looks at him suspiciously, yet sits down anyway. "Who are you and what have you done with Jon?" he says.

I knew from that very sentence he was "dating" Spencer, no kidding. I have those kind of powers. :file:

"You have Angelina Jolie lips."

Hey! That's not a bad thing; it's a god-damn compliment, thankyouverymuch. Lips akin to both Brendon and Angelina's are way sexy. :cheese:

"Pft, you're the girl, and Hobo's our kid. So there."

Hahaha, dude, you just made Brendon the one who wears 'em trousers. :tehe: I knew you'd finally come to your senses.

Three days pass. It's three fucking days since their "date", and they haven't spoken to each other.

That, my dear chum, is called the three-days-rule. It's completely legible (except maybe in this case, 'cause Ryan's got OCD and all), and utterly idiotic.

"Oh, I know," Ryan shudders. "I didn't even see it, and I was traumatized."

Brendon hums. "Probably because I explained the entire scene in detail," he answers nonchalantly.

:lmfao Oh god, I love you, okay?

And about the "U is far behind in the alphabet"--man, I hate that! My last name starts with a S, so it isn't that far behind, but jeez, it takes ages for the teachers to get to it.

You remember when I said "Nazareth" was by far your best work? I take that back; this is even better.

OMGWTFAMAZINGBBQ! :shock:
I honestly think that you should be famous.
Ugh, the end was PERFECT. I mean, honestly, just Ryan's session was amazing. So much emotion and truth. And how Brendon went to Ryan and kissed him and told him he loved him... Just perfect.
Your writing is amazing.
You should be proud.

The Academy Island:

Okay, to start things off. I feel super bad, for not commenting enough.
I'm sorry. I really, really, really love this story. You're an awesome writer.

You're forgiven, since I highly approve of your theme. :cute:

Okay, to start things off. I feel super bad, for not commenting enough.
I'm sorry. I really, really, really love this story. You're an awesome writer.

there's only one word to describe this story.

whachawwwwww!!!!! *ninja moves!*

that's how awesome it was.

I love this story, it was really cute.

btw I'm not a big fan of 'Change' it was good but it brought back what made me feel annoyed about Ryan. He is not Ryan Ross anymore, he is Ryan Ross the John Lennon! Having inspiration is fine, good and also necessary but he went over line!

This is an amazing story. Absolutely amazing. I love it.

I love how you portray Ryan and Brendon. They can't function without one another. It is beautiful.

Truly exceptional. :D

Rain.Is.Beautiful:

It just goes to show how much I've been awaiting this when the first thing I do after reading the notification e-mail is open up my itunes and press play on the playlist I created (download courtesy of Limewire) just for reading this story....Definitely not dissapointed by the ending. I loved the fact that you put in the epilogue since I hate how some authors just have the problem resolved and then don't say what happens afterward.....Even though it was such a happy ending I'm sad now that it's over....

P.S. You're the only writer that I've commented on more than 50% time when they update or post a story.....even George Ryan Ross' stuff which I've been reading for even longer....You've made it to my top three!

You made a playlist for my story? :arms: Hay, ily a little. Ok a lot.

I'm so glad to hear that you liked it.

Patrick Stump.:

Ohay. I wrote a book.

You. Are. My. Favorite. EVAR. :hug: :yah :weird :arms: ;;P :coffee: ~~ :tehe:

Ohay. I wrote a book.

Epic comment of all epics.

I don't even know how that relates to the song, but it does in my head.
LOL. YOUR HEAD IS FUCKED.

Ryan Ross looks pretty well put together when you first see him.
I know this is an AU, but. |: You're kidding me right?

Ryan uncrosses his legs and sits up straight now. "No. I'm not better; I'm not worse. I'm just. Stationary."

"Stationary," Brendon repeats, tasting the word on his tongue. The taste is bitter and confusing, and he doesn't like it.

Ryan nods. "Stationary."
LOL STATIONARY STATIONARY STATIONARY STATIONARY STATIONARY STATIONARY.

Looking Ryan over for a moment, he stammers, "Well, I don't date... uh..." He tries to figure out what Ryan is. Crazy dude? Suicidal maniac? "Hippies."

Ryan laughs. "Hippies?! Of all the things you could come up with, you chose hippies," he drolls.

"Ya, well. You kind of are. If the scarf fits..." Brendon trails off, grinning.

"Strangle you with it," Ryan mutters, and Brendon's still smiling.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

He catches Ryan staring intently at his feet.

Blushing, Brendon questions, "What?" he thinks he really shouldn't be be so embarrassed in front of someone who's already seen his dick.

"You're wearing two different colored socks," Ryan mumbles.
AWWWW OMG. BRENDON IS SO FUCKING ADORABLESOMETIMES ALL THE TIME. \o/

B-

Hey. Went to go get breakfast and coffee. Stick around if you want.

RR.

Brendon heart swells, because, okay, if 'B' isn't a nickname, he doesn't know what is. And Ryan obviously wants him to stick around. That's probably the most amazing thing he's ever read in his life.

A small snore is emitted from Hobo, and Brendon smiles. Maybe they're getting somewhere.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
God damned they were made for each other.

After she leaves, William immediately leans over Brendon's desk and demands, "Spill."

"Spill what, my coffee?" Brendon retorts, scoffing.
LMAO. OH THAT BRENDON.

Bill's mouth drops, making a perfect O with his pink lips. "You fucked a patient, didn't you?!" he accuses.

"No!" Brendon lies, blushing. "I didn't, I swear."
BRENDON, YOU SHOULD KNOW THIS BY NOW.
YOU ARE A HORRIBLE LIAR.

The thing about Ryan is that he's precise: perfectly timed thrusts, well thought out angles. He wants to get it perfect every time. He doesn't leave any room for mistakes.
:yah :yah :yah

He takes a deep breath and eventually does it, typing away on his Sidekick and simply stating 'I can't sleep'. If Ryan doesn't text back, he'll be fine with it (he knows he's lying to himself).

His phone vibrates about a minute later, and he can't help but think that was really quick.

From: Ryan<33 (M)
At 3:28am
Me neither. Want me to come over?

He quickly texts back, 'You remember where it is?' He wants to make sure, because Ryan's only been there once, and that was their first night together.

From: Ryan<33 (M)
At 3:31am
Be there in ten.
AWWWWWWWWWWW RYAN AND BDEN. GOSH I LOVE THOSE FUCKERS.
That was just. Wow. Adorable beyond all reasons.

"Nothing. I was just. Missing you, I guess," Brendon mumbles, blushing slightly.

Ryan is quiet for a few long moments, then puts his hand to cradle Brendon's cheek, tilting his face up and kissing him softly.
If I wasn't so lazy, I'd find a fainting smiley and put it here.

"I'm just... I just don't know, okay! I'm still trying to figure you out. I barely know you, really, yet I trust you with everything I have every single day. I need you to promise me that the second you want out, you'll just go. I don't want you to be in something you don't believe in," Brendon explains, tears threatening to spill over.
EH EH EH. AFJHSDFSDFSKDF. :crazy: I WANNA HUGGLE HIM.

He's seen people getting mugged and clips on the news of people dying and babies getting blown up and all of that shit.
BROOTAL TESSA, BROOTAL.

"Yeah, well. That's because you're not smart like me," Ryan argues, " And you're sitting on my dick, and it seriously hurts."

Brendon rearranges his body and rests his face in Ryan's neck. "If it wasn't so fucking big, you wouldn't have to worry about me sitting on it."

"Like you would want it to be smaller," Ryan smirks.

Ryan really knows what makes him blush. "No comment," Brendon mumbles.
LOLOLOLOLOL. THE MONSTERCOCK MAKES AN APPEARANCE ONCE AGAIN!

"Bill, that's great! We're really happy for you. Aren't we, Patrick?" Brendon looks to Patrick for confirmation.

"Yes. Fucking thrilled," Patrick deadpans.
THAT'S MY BABY<3333333

Spencer nods. "Nice to finally meet you," he replies, shaking Brendon's hand and stressing the last three words with flourish.

"Fuck you, not my fault you're never here. Run along to Jon now," Ryan dismisses, announcing his presence while coming from his bedroom.

"Wait... Walker?" Brendon questions.

"Uh, yeah actually. Why?" Spencer answers.

"Oh. He's just my roommate, that's all," Brendon states, chuckling to himself. He's going to have to have a talk with Jon when he gets home.

Spencer frowns. "Wow. Um, that's a little..." he trails off.

"Ironic," Ryan states. "It's ironic, Spence."

Spencer rolls his eyes. "Yeah. Thanks," he retorts.
LOL RYAN IS MY TWIN. I LOOK LIKE HIM, ANDDDD I ACT LIKE HIM. LOOOOL.

"Well, get out now, please and thank you," Ryan says, pushing Spencer straight toward the exit.
How rude.


"Yeah, yeah, I know, or else you'll hold out on me," Ryan mutters.

"Honey, I should let you know now that I don't put out on the first date," Brendon replies, smirking over his shoulder.

Ryan twists his long arms around Brendon's waist and whispers in his ear lowly, "How about after?"

Smiling to himself, Brendon replies, "Maybe."

"To a patient's house. He called and asked if she could come to him just this once. He kind of sounded like a wreck," Gabe shrugs.

"Oh my God," Brendon whispers to himself. He looks to the clock, and, sure enough, it's about five minutes until Ryan's appointment is due to start. "Fuck."

Bill looks at Brendon sympathetically. "I'm sure he's fine," he says.

"I'm just-" Brendon cuts himself off. He's a mess; his head already has a huge lump on it and he's on the verge of tears. He's surprised he's even functioning at this point. "I'm gonna go home. I'll see you." He trudges out the door before Bill gets the chance to say a word.
That made my hart hurt real bad, I hope you know.

"Really big lips, great ass. Awesome hips. He doesn't mind bottoming like all the- Oh, sorry."
SHIT RYAN WHY'D YOU STOP. I WANNA HEAR THE REST.

"We made dinner at my place. It was perfect. Like, it just felt right, you know? And I just... I'm incapable of having any sort of functioning relationship with anyone but Spencer. So after that night he tried to call me, but I didn't answer. I feel so bad."

"Wow. You're kind of an asshole," she informs him.
LOL. THIS IS THE BEST FIC!VICKY EVAR! \o/

"I love you, okay? Even though you were an emotionally detached dick. And I think you kind of love me too. I know we're not perfect; we both have our issues. But I think you're kind of perfect for me, and I'm willing to take you as you are. I know it's so hard for you to trust people, but I know you need someone to rely on just like every one else. I want us to have a normal relationship like other people have and go on dates and hold hands. I can be there for you. Just, please. Don't throw me away," Brendon begs, looking up at Ryan with sad eyes.
*DIGS BRENDON OUT OF THE GARBAGE* HE IS MIIIIINE. MIIIINE I TELL YOU. *walks away petting Brendon*

"If it means you not killing yourself because you keep trying to run in it? Yes. I'll never hear the end of it from Jon if you crack your head open on the pavement," Ryan tells him.

"Well it's nice to know it's because you couldn't bear to have anything bad happen to me," Brendon deadpans.
LOL. Oh Rydon<3

"No clue. I just hope they aren't fucking in the bathroom like last time."
I WANT ALTERNATE ENDING WITH JON AND SPENCER. BEFORE THE PARTY.

"Oh, I know," Ryan shudders. "I didn't even see it, and I was traumatized."

Brendon hums. "Probably because I explained the entire scene in detail," he answers nonchalantly.

"Yeah, that might have something to do with it," Ryan mutters under his breath.
LOL THAT'S SO BRENNY!!!


Jon kisses Spencer's cheek. "You have such a way with words, dear."

"You weren't complaining last night, as I recall," Spencer retorts, raising an eyebrow.
SDVJSFDHGSDSKDHGKSDG. LOLOLOL SPENCE<3

"No fighting!" Brendon interjects. "This is about me, remember."

"Oh, I'm sorry, how insensitive of us," Jon deadpans, "We'll just take this to the bedroom." He grabs Spencer's wrist and tugs him in the direction of their room.
ALT FIC ALT FIC ALTFICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC!! :crazy:


"I just... I wanted to tell you that I'm proud of you. About the job and graduating and everything. You did a really good job," Ryan states. His soft honey eyes bore into Brendon's soul, it seems like, and he really just melts.

Brendon grins and pulls Ryan in for another kiss. It sounds like "I love you".
SJFHSDF. You have ruined everyone elses Rydon for me. Yours is the only ones I read. :file:

[/END OF EPIC COMMENT]

It just goes to show how much I've been awaiting this when the first thing I do after reading the notification e-mail is open up my itunes and press play on the playlist I created (download courtesy of Limewire) just for reading this story....Definitely not dissapointed by the ending. I loved the fact that you put in the epilogue since I hate how some authors just have the problem resolved and then don't say what happens afterward.....Even though it was such a happy ending I'm sad now that it's over....

P.S. You're the only writer that I've commented on more than 50% time when they update or post a story.....even George Ryan Ross' stuff which I've been reading for even longer....You've made it to my top three!

omgoshh.
Wonderful ending. My heart like, swelled near the very end.
Everything is so amazingly written.
I loved this.
I also loved 'Change'. I can't wait to hear more of their music. :]

I WANT THE LAST PARTTTT!!!! I SHALL BEG, BEG, BEGGGG!!!!
this is amazing!

ASKDHASJHFSGDKG.
YOU MELTED MY ALREADY MELTED BRAIN.
EPIC COMMENT OF ALL PROPORTIONS TOMORROW.
SLEEP NAO. \o/

@RossInspired I really just can't handle het anymore. I'm a snob in that way. :XD

@R.I.B. His girlfriend left him for an iphone?! :lmfao That's awesome. And yes. Gabilliam >>>>>>>>>>> Treckett. Treckett is gross.

If I get more nice comments like these I'll post tonight. :cute:

COntinuation of my previous comment since my internet shorted out on me earlier....

I'm really happy that William got together with Gabe! Everyone knows Travis just doesn't suit him. And Brendon just is a very interesting character in this chapter.... the part when he was crying under the table reminded me of a part in Boston Legal when one of the lawyers was doing the same thing because his girlfriend left him for an iphone.....

But all in all I have to applaud you for being able to write such a awesome funny/sad chapter. It makes me sad(der) that there's only one more chapter left....

wow this is extremely well written. i like how you made every male character gay...ahahah thats amazing....go ryden xD
i agree with alot of the above comments...how you portrayed every character so well..especially ryan...how hes just a complete emotional mess and how brendon is happy-go-lucky...
haha idk i just love it...
finish it up so i stop wondering wats gonna happen next please...=]