I Won't Call This Hell - Comments

loved it. (:
Had to go back to the previous chapters to remember who Max was though. Hah. Don't really know what's going onn, but update soon to let us know? (:
Mine is listen to your heart ! <3 Can't really believe it's John singing in the beginning though. It sounds...different, but nonetheless amazing. It's the chorus when it sounds like what John sounds like on the last album/when he sings the older songs. I'm not sure if that makes sense at all...
But okay haha. anyway, amazing chapterr update soon.(:

saving grace is my favorite overall.

this chapter was amazing as usual!
and i have to say my favorites are listen to your heart, saving grace, and color : )

Gah, this is one of my favorite stories at the moment :)
I think my favorite off B&W would have to be Give It To Me, Fuel To The Fire, or Color. I'm too indecisive to choose.

WHY WAS THIS SO SHORT OMG I NEED MORE THIS IS WAY TOO GOOD!! I think that this is one of the only stories that could get my heart beating really fast in anticipation.

fav off of b&w: saving grace

Awww I love this chapter!
And I like how you added Aniela's story, it was darling!!!
Can't wait for the update :D

awwwh; please update; its tooo good not to be updated!

Awh. Aniela's story is cute. haha.
Gosh. Cliff-hanger....They suck sometimes...and this is one of those times.
Update before monday? I'm leaving on monday for a month...and won't have internet.! D: Please?
haha.
I hope everything goes well...! With John...and they get back together. hahah.
Anyway, loved it. Update(:
<3

SOOOOO good I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next so excited!!!!

Can there be more soon? I just love this so much!

I liked the last half, after the phone call :)

Currently, it's 1:51AM. I stayed up for the past hour or two reading this. And, I am completely addicted. Haha.(: Chapterr 24, I was curious as to what the author's note said in the small print, and I feel that way sometimes too. Not sure if you just hate it all the time period, but I like it but don't at the same time. Kind of like a love-hate relationship.hah.
Well, last chapter, I'm a bit confused by that last paragraph. Might be cause it's late and I can't think, but it confused me. Hahah.
But this story, is amazing. Kind of hard for me to find a story like this. Any story. Maybe I'm picky about what I read. If there's a lot of grammer mistakes I exit out sometimes, weird flowing of words/sentences, mostly all dialogue. I don't know, I'm just picky about what I read I guess.
But, this story passed. Haha.(: Made me tear a few times throughout this. I don't really remember exactly where, but I guess when they broke up would be one part ?
Made me feel like squealing like I'm ten when I see someone claiming I have found the love of my life. haha.
As to what should happen in the end, of course, as most people and cliches want and end up, for them to be togetherr.(: Hahahaa.
Anyway, I'll stop babbling. I love the story, update soon. And if you couldd explain that last paragraphh for me, I'd love you...more than I do now.(:
<3

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

In one whole sitting: read chapters 1-27 of this witty, crafty story.
I love it! =)

I really really happened to like that chapter very good especially after the phone call ^^

another cliffhanger? :'( your story is so addicting! I want more!

Lovedddddd this! :D
She shouldddd call John ;p
I seemed to have missed the chapter before this, but it was good too! :P
Can't wait for you to update this :]

Let me just say, I absolutely loved this one part:
I was confused by confrontation. The thing I had thought I had understood. Confrontation was yelling, crying, swearing. Confrontation was fists and bruises. Confrontation was words that sting and burn.

It was, until he changed that; until John blindsided me, taking me by surprise, and turning my world upside down. He took what I knew and turned it into something foreign, something I didn’t understand. He turned it around, flipped it inside out, and painted it a completely different color.

John took what I understood. John took what I thought I would always recognize, something I thought I could always see coming.

I really don't quite know why, but I love it. I understood it, and it seemed to completely lay out everything that she was thinking then perfectly, which isn't too easy to do.

I loved it, and I loved the realization she made at the end.
And also, I liked how you described her nervous-ness at calling one of them, it made me nervous myself because it made me remember calling people I was scared to call.
I think this story is absolutely lovely. (:

okay this story is amazing
update soon? :]

great chapter:)..but i'd like to know how Johns feeling about this though
awesome story..update soon!!