Whaaaaa? Sorry, I just found this story today, and kind of adore it. But i'm confused with the last chapter...he just dumped her right? If he did, and you confirm it I'll leave you a nice "John-rawr" (and yes that is a technical term) comment, but I don't want to do that if he's just being kinda bipolar...you know? Lol
"I didn't see John. I saw a guard, much stronger than mine." I thought that line was really powerful. It also shows that they're meant for each other! They both have walls and they should let them down together.
I'm really looking forward to what will happen next. :)
I looooved it. Lyn isn't too much of a drama queen. :] But she needs to stop being a negative nancy! Lyn and John 4L. All I'm saying. Update soon girly, this story is too good :D
I like Miss Drama Queen Lynnette. I'm not sure why, I just do. I really wish she wouldn't doubt her relationship though. The girl needs to just let herself fall in love! Or else I'm calling my "friends".
I really liked this chapter :D It's nice seeing what Lynn's thinking... But she thinks so lowly of herself...and the relationship... I think her and the relationship could blossom into something that they don't expect... LOL, I'm so lame for putting that little reference there xD But chyeeah...
that little video at the end made me smile. i can't get over how young they look.
as for the chapter... she needs to give up this act of trying to convince herself that she doesn't like him and just go with the flow already and enjoy the ride.
Whatever, John totally picks up chicks at street corners and you know it. ;D But I'm really glad that Lynnette is starting to commit. It makes me oh-so-happy.
Sorry, I just found this story today, and kind of adore it. But i'm confused with the last chapter...he just dumped her right? If he did, and you confirm it I'll leave you a nice "John-rawr" (and yes that is a technical term) comment, but I don't want to do that if he's just being kinda bipolar...you know? Lol
Nice work. I really do like this story :) x