I Won't Call This Hell - Comments

  • Tasssshhh

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    Whaaaaa?
    Sorry, I just found this story today, and kind of adore it. But i'm confused with the last chapter...he just dumped her right? If he did, and you confirm it I'll leave you a nice "John-rawr" (and yes that is a technical term) comment, but I don't want to do that if he's just being kinda bipolar...you know? Lol

    Nice work. I really do like this story :) x
    January 8th, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • beccuh

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    omg....i like really love this chapter
    update soon
    January 8th, 2010 at 08:01pm
  • stay awake;

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    "I didn't see John. I saw a guard, much stronger than mine."
    I thought that line was really powerful. It also shows that they're meant for each other!
    They both have walls and they should let them down together.

    I'm really looking forward to what will happen next. :)
    December 24th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • fallOUT

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    Jeez, John being... gah, no words to describe.
    I think he need to get his crap together with his girlfriend,
    before he thinks of fixing anything else.
    November 25th, 2009 at 08:12pm
  • Kyungsoup

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    jfihdsudgvdjn >:O
    John is pissing me offfff!
    Love this<3 So dramatical.
    Update soon girly. :P
    November 25th, 2009 at 06:21pm
  • ilovepatkirch

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    Ahhh, I want to know what happens! Haha the suspense is killing me! :)
    Update soon?
    November 25th, 2009 at 04:03pm
  • camera ready kids.

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    Short, sweet (:
    But what's with John?
    -Sigh-

    Update soon? <3
    November 25th, 2009 at 07:39am
  • Kyungsoup

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    I loved it. :D
    Tre cute.
    BUUUTTTTTT way to drop that effin' bomb John! >:O
    </3
    See first line of comment.
    Update soon s'il vous plait :]
    November 19th, 2009 at 03:12am
  • ilovepatkirch

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    LOVED IT!
    More soon maybe?
    November 17th, 2009 at 02:41am
  • camera ready kids.

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    Awwuh, they're so cute together (:
    But...uh oh...
    I can feel a...possible argument...? soon :\

    Update soon? :DD
    November 16th, 2009 at 11:53pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    mmm.
    me likey ;D
    November 16th, 2009 at 11:07pm
  • Kyungsoup

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    I looooved it. Lyn isn't too much of a drama queen. :]
    But she needs to stop being a negative nancy!
    Lyn and John 4L. All I'm saying.
    Update soon girly, this story is too good :D
    November 16th, 2009 at 12:00am
  • stay awake;

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    I like Miss Drama Queen Lynnette. I'm not sure why, I just do.
    I really wish she wouldn't doubt her relationship though.
    The girl needs to just let herself fall in love! Or else I'm calling my "friends".

    This update was lovely, like they always are. :)
    November 14th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • camera ready kids.

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    I really liked this chapter :D
    It's nice seeing what Lynn's thinking...
    But she thinks so lowly of herself...and the relationship...
    I think her and the relationship could blossom into something that they don't expect...
    LOL, I'm so lame for putting that little reference there xD
    But chyeeah...

    Update? <333
    November 14th, 2009 at 05:10am
  • stay awake;

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    I take it back! Garrett and I shall dance like that at our wedding. :]

    Now to the story, this chapter was really cute. Especially Lyn being nervous.
    So please update soon because I really do love this story.
    October 19th, 2009 at 03:51am
  • Kyungsoup

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    Yay long chapter!
    I enjoyed it. Her and John are tre cute!
    And the .gif thing in the author's note made me smile :D
    Update soon s'il vous plait!
    October 18th, 2009 at 09:01pm
  • doesn'tbelieveinlove

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    that little video at the end made me smile. i can't get over how young they look.

    as for the chapter... she needs to give up this act of trying to convince herself that she doesn't like him and just go with the flow already and enjoy the ride.
    October 18th, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • RCL.

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    Is that Garrett and John dancing?
    October 18th, 2009 at 04:01am
  • camera ready kids.

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    Haha, MAX owns (:
    Adorable chapter :D

    & SLOW DANCING...bahahaha xD
    I totally remember Kennedy saying something along the lines of:
    OH BABEEEY. Now that's love.
    Hehe x]

    Oh and...update soon please? :D
    October 18th, 2009 at 03:19am
  • stay awake;

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    Whatever, John totally picks up chicks at street corners and you know it. ;D
    But I'm really glad that Lynnette is starting to commit. It makes me oh-so-happy.
    October 12th, 2009 at 05:08pm