A Little Piece of Heaven. - Comments

  • fayeislost

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    OH NO ZACKY!!!!!!!!!!!
    He can't die can he?
    Please don't make him die. :(

    And what was with the scary dream thing?

    Loved the update, can't wait for more.
    August 24th, 2009 at 10:30am
  • cruciatus.

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    This was pretty cool. It kind of reminds me of the movie Coraline, some parts of it. But much, much better. Great job. XD
    August 24th, 2009 at 07:39am
  • Scorpianram99

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    awesomness
    can't wait for more
    update soon
    August 24th, 2009 at 03:23am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    holy shit
    you killed zacky
    this story gets more and more confusing with each chapter
    August 23rd, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • james owen sullivan.

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    Ahhh!!!! You need to update again today!!
    Pleeeaaaaasssseeeeeeeee!!!
    I dontnusually beg... But I'm begginnnggggg!
    Pleaseee update!!
    August 23rd, 2009 at 10:23pm
  • fayeislost

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    New Reader!

    I love this it's fab.
    That vicar was kinda creepy though wouldn't want to meet him in a dark alley.

    Can't wait for more.
    August 21st, 2009 at 04:02pm
  • CharmedLuna

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    I was like WHOA

    so many things happened!!!

    Thanks for the great updates
    August 21st, 2009 at 12:36am
  • Caught In A Mosh

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    love your story!!!!!! please update soon :)
    August 20th, 2009 at 02:54pm
  • Scorpianram99

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    awesome
    can't wait for more
    August 18th, 2009 at 04:45am
  • cruciatus.

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    thank you.. so much. People have been messaging me and shanking me with mean comments, I'm sorry If i freaked anyone out. You made me feel good. Cry
    No one should send hate mail on Mibba, in my opinion. Don't feel discouraged; your story is very unique, well-written, suspenseful, original, and all things good! XD
    August 18th, 2009 at 02:39am
  • cruciatus.

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    Interesting. Very interesting. XD
    August 18th, 2009 at 02:36am
  • Skyler Kamikaze

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    Chillax, i have finished reading this and must say you are doing an amazing job. If anyone thinks this story sucks then they are just stupid and doesn't know anything good. They probably like stupid stories that don't really make any sense what so ever.

    Haha ranting a little...anyway this is really really really good. So stop freaking out.
    It's an awesome story don't let anyone tell you wrong... because they are just jealous (because they can't write a stroy this good) and lie.
    thank you.. so much. People have been messaging me and shanking me with mean comments, I'm sorry If i freaked anyone out. You made me feel good. Cry
    August 17th, 2009 at 11:25pm
  • SynfulPleasures

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    Chillax, i have finished reading this and must say you are doing an amazing job. If anyone thinks this story sucks then they are just stupid and doesn't know anything good. They probably like stupid stories that don't really make any sense what so ever.

    Haha ranting a little...anyway this is really really really good. So stop freaking out.
    It's an awesome story don't let anyone tell you wrong... because they are just jealous (because they can't write a stroy this good) and lie.
    August 17th, 2009 at 10:52pm
  • Syn_Sex

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    wheeee, that was scary...with her dieing and stuff....but luckily she's back now !!

    I really hope that emilie stays where she is so that erin can stay with the guys...I don't want her to die :D
    August 17th, 2009 at 10:02pm
  • Vesper Martini

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    I do like this story. Please update when you can
    August 17th, 2009 at 09:41pm
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    I loved it!!!!!!
    August 17th, 2009 at 09:40pm
  • james owen sullivan.

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    Simply amazing!!
    August 17th, 2009 at 09:38pm
  • Brutaldoll_Ink;

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    Oooh, this story is hella good. Clap
    I'm not that into the vampyre craze, but this is a very good exception.
    You're a very talented writer, and I can't wait to read more. d^-^b

    And from Chapter 16 :
    ""Do you believe in time travel?""
    Someone has been watching too much Donnie Darko. >:p
    August 2nd, 2009 at 07:32pm
  • itsjustmiah

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    whoa!!

    that was totally weird x]

    it freaked me out with brian's part, l0l

    it's sad to find out that it was brian's and oli's fault she died :(
    but i hope erin stays instead of emilie, hahaha
    July 30th, 2009 at 07:11pm
  • Scorpianram99

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    love this story
    can't wait for more
    July 27th, 2009 at 07:18pm