“I love yeh,” Oliver blurted, interrupting my part of the argument. “Okay, I said it. I fuckin’ love yeh and I miss yeh. I miss how we used to be. I don’t want to end this crazy marriage, I don’t even want to start over. I just want to brush off the past and keep going.”
GAH, HE SAID IT. HE SAID THE EXACT THING I WANTED HIM TO. But I wasn't expecting it. XD What's next? :)
this did not suck at all! this was so good. im so happy that you udpated, like honestly when i checked my emails and this was updated i pretty much screamed with joy! :D gosh, them too need to like lighten up. it was so cute what oliver said at the end! thats not the end is it... o_o dont let that be the end! D: you must update this as soon as possible! i honestly love this story so much, one of the best ive ever read on mibba and i haven't been on mibba for even a year yet! please update soon, i love your writing and this story is just pure perfection! the tension between oliver and taylor is so good and their relationship seems so real as well, you've got it all right! dont stop :D
Came across this today at the library. You got me all sucked in with your summary, then my time was up. I ran to my friends house a few blocks away, and went straight to finding your story and I've read it all, and it just got right good when Oli was saying how he loved her and shit, and you had no more chapters I FREAKED. Hahaha, Well keep it up, I'm enjoying it.