gahhh! Doctor Owens is such a creeper! lmao. But in all honesty, I was shocked that he suggested it. I mean, their dinner date was going amazing, and then he just sprung that on them. I honestly laughed so hard though. It was awkward, yet so funny. I'm also glad they didn't force it. Things would have been wayy to awkward, and that would be so sad. They were cute at the end though. Just being natural is good for them. Love this story! So update soon! :D <3
I think I may be in love with this entire story. In the most recent chapter, when he held her hand pre panic attack, my heart melted. This is so beautiful and I can't wait for the next update.
If you love me, let me know. If you don’t, please gently, let me go
I have heard that before...whats it from???? Oh and I found this last night I got to chapter 14 then mum made me get off...I get on today and start reading again and Im in love....is it cliche for me to say I cried when Oli cried? too bad if it is :p Uhm Im up to the very beggining of chappy 25 and Im gonna subscribe after Ive caught up probs comment again :) I love it :D
I stood and walked to the door before opening it. Oliver’s hair was wet, clinging to his face and neck like perfection. He smelled of aftershave and toothpaste; a combination on him that could drive me crazy. ------- I was going to mention something to Oliver along the lines of “we should have gotten here earlier,” but I bit my tongue. The last thing we needed was another fight. --------- My eyes connected with his while he reacted out for me and grasped my hand. The contact surprised me but I embraced it, letting him rescue me from the chaos and lead me towards one of the loading gates. ---------- Smoothly, my palm followed his and reconnected to his hand. He glanced over at me, shooting me a confused look but brushed it off with the blink of his eyes. ---------- I hid the small smile that was threatening to take over my face. ------------- “I’ll probably be back ‘round five. If yeh want, maybe we could go to dinner tonight?” ------------- “Do yeh still want to go to dinner, or do yeh just want to sleep?” Oliver’s voice was finally clear to me, but so was the fact that his hand was still on my back. --------------- I only peaked out once to see Oliver’s amused face leaning over me. ----------------- Sure, I probably didn’t look very attractive while in a rush, but the fact he was still interested in my half naked body was reassuring. ----------------- Oliver didn’t realize that just because he stuck sex in the middle of the list meant I wouldn’t catch it. No matter how nonchalant something was said, sex could never be overlooked. -Fabulous!
Between the wine and the future phone call to Dr. Owens, I felt like something might end up going wrong. -how about something going right instead?
AHHH! I luffs this very much. :) I cannot tell you how happy them holding hands for that short little while made me. I was going to get really upset that he let go, but then she grasped his hand again, and I was all smiles. xD I'm glad they're somewhat getting along, although you can still kinda sense the awkwardness now between them. I laughed a lot at the mention of the Doc wanting them to do it. I think he just wants to hear about how good it is. xD lmao. But I'm definitely loving the little teasing that they're getting in there. I love them, and I hope it works out. Nothing needs to go wrong! lmao. Update soon! :D <3
i squealed like a little girl when i got the email that this story has been updated! like i seroiusly love this story so much! are they gonna do it?! they should haha i think so yes, pretty sure others think so as well actually. but anywhoo that was such a good chapter :D totally am hooked to this story! seems like they are counting on doc to help them out when they should just talk and jump each other haha. gosh i cant wait to find out what happens! also did they fly from sheffield down to london? cause if they did, thats not possbile ha! i think its like a five or six hour drive. and there arent different time zones in england, we all run on the same day and time! but oh well, haha sorry! i still love this story, dont get me wroong! totally just hooked on it, you'll have to update soon otherwise i might just go a bit insane.. i think so yes. this story is just, dskdfjslew its just bloody brilliant, im so glad i came across it! :D its amazing! well done, you should get an award i think. update soon please :D
HOW DO YOU TEASEEEEE ME LIKE THIS? GET THEM TALKING ABOUT SEX, AND THEN END THE CHAPTER. THANKS A LOT, KELSIE. YOU'RE GONNA GIVE US ALL BLUE BALLZ WITH THIS STORY.
But it was brill, nonetheless. When she was sleeping, and he came back and had his hand on her back, I about melted. Or when she held his hand in the airport. Ugh. You're killin' me.
Haha, yay! Update. :) Hmm, so Sam controls you eh? I think I found a web now. Equations for faster updates. :D
Well, I'd comment like usual but a new story seemed to catch my attention at the moment. Hmm, I wonder who is responsible for that....
I should be sleeping but...I think one more read won't hurt.
Quick comment since I wouldn't be able to sleep if I didn't:
Oliver should seriously just tell her he wants to mack and they can do it all night loooong. XD I really hope nothing bad happens, I like when they get along. And I love it when Oli checks her out. Love it. ;) Tooo much. Haha.
Chachacha, some love is bound to come out of this. I can feeeeel is.
THE NEED TO MACK. OOOOH, YEAAAAH. (yup, I've been using a lot of caps lately...)
But in all honesty, I was shocked that he suggested it. I mean, their dinner date was going amazing, and then he just sprung that on them. I honestly laughed so hard though. It was awkward, yet so funny.
I'm also glad they didn't force it. Things would have been wayy to awkward, and that would be so sad. They were cute at the end though. Just being natural is good for them. Love this story!
So update soon! :D <3