Immortal Enemies - Comments

Shitttttt i freaking almost cried girlll!!!!

Ohmygod I loved this story. The end made me bawl but I still loved it. I'm so sad they went to hell, but at least they'll be together(: But, you should make a sequel:) They should come back or something :o

the end just totally made me bawl!

I cried at the end =[
This is a great story. I felt like a cheese ball when I started crying x]

Awww I'm all teary. At least they'll be with each other.

AWWWWWW!!!! it was an awesome story.=]

OMG they died:(!!!!!!!!!!!
And went to hell......
I hate that the story is over but I'm excited about you starting new ones.:)

i can't believe this is over

I almost cried at last bit =[ poor Zee and Bee DX
it was still an awesome story though =]

Uh... Hello! I like the story.
i think its so cute that they first hate each other, then they fall inlove, etc.
I subscribed to this story and yeah... Really like this story. :D
Ciao!

okay seriously...update! >_< haha

Damn it they're fighting...:(
Zacky is being such a asshole...foreal.
And I just feel so bad for Bee.
Uh oh more drama... And they have guns..
Can't wait for the next update!

ohhh zacky and johnny r in for it now!!! update again please!!!!

edit: double post.... sorry!

hahahahaha that chapter was awesome. loved it so much. brian and zack kissing was hilarious. and my johnny was being a bad influence on zack *shakes finger*. he should be in trouble for that haha.
anyway, i'm sad its ending soon. =( will you be doing a sequal or anything?

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Oh yea A little Synacky action going on!
Boom I got your boyfriend.... I got your man!!!:D I totally remember that:)
I love Bee and Brian's banter..it's hilarious and genius!
But ruh roo looks like Zee and JC are in trouble:(

omg Bri n Zee kissed LMAO (i over lolled) XD
and oooo Zee n short shite in trouble muhaha

is it her parents?

I feel sorry for Bree but I am glad that Ashley forgave her.
But yea I totally bet that jets her parents at the door.
Cant wait to read more
Update soon please!

i think the guests r her parents usually i am not good at guessing so i think this guess was worth posting keep the update coming cuz they make my story belly happy :)