Rebyl Jayde - Comments

what do u want 2 edit
ughh i hate editing
takes for ever
and editors r really picky

guess what song i listening 2
JB's Sorry

Im sorry 4 breaking all the promises that i never meant 2 break,its all me this time is the last time, i will ever beg you to stay, but ur already on ur way

gahh i really want to edit some of it, but I LOVE THE CHANGES YOU MADE!!!!!!!!! Devious Intentions is one of sexiest band names i have ever heard!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Im sorry, I don't like the name The Hospital... It needs something more... I don't know. Interesting I guess. The mistakes are really bothering me. Am I being too picky? I'm glad you put this story on mibba though.

HEY!! You didn't put that I wrote the prologue!!! I need to edit the prologue, there are some things bothering me. I'm sorry but I hate the layout, can we make on up? You should put the second chapter as the description, that's what I was telling you at school. Sorry, for bashing, but since I'm co author I'd like some say. I do like the story though.

i like it :)