Deadly Perception - Comments

I just re-read this, because after this long I never forgot your story.
I still absolutely LOVE it.

Ewwww..... Jack was groping Riley's butt! How could Mrs. O'keiff(sp?) not notice that!? And OMG! He almost raped her in the previous chapter. Pedofile! I feel sorry for Riley. And I could visualize what you were writing, and my body was completely chilled from it. *shudders* Riley need's to knee him in the genitials. He might learn after that. :]

I just subscribed, even though the story is completed and I am only on chapter 13 thus far. I love Jack, though, he seems albiet of a horndog, no? Although, that is like most guys, but I doubt they'd want to molest or possibly rape their foster sister! O.O But then again, men are such complicated beings. Also, kinda wierd that there are two Jacks now, and the other named Nate. Blaze is sssoooo scary by the way. Well, I know I'd pee my pants standing next to him at least. Riley seemed just like an innocent young girl before, then I hear curse like a ling shoeman, and shes going through all this crap!? Geeeeeze. You remind me of my friend that loves putting their characters through pain. O.o Kinda wierd. *takes a deep breath* And finally, Nick is pretty cool, and I feel for him in the whole older brother dead thins, killed because of drugs and money. I cried at that part..... TTT___TTT I'll read the rest and comment every two chapters, hopefully, after I hit the showers. Oh! And in Chapter Six, of my story, Sinful Suicide, I'll put a special dedication to you in the author's note, AND make a character of you. *sheepish grin* What do you wish her to look like? You? Any changes? Just leave a comment or send a message to me. :D

I must say.... You're quite the writer. (:
I love Riley's character!

I can't wait to finish and read the sequel. :D

Whoa this is really good :)
I'm off to read the sequal now ;)

I so glad that they are leaving that place.
I can't wait to read the sequel next. :D

wait, they didn't leave the place yet. so technially they could still be trapped if they get back before the two of them leave.
uh oh.

nick, i love you.
jack, i am going to kill you.
thank god she didn't die. i would have been absolutely heartbroken.

yay!! escape!!
aww nick is such a sweetheart
im glad you didnt end it with them trapped

i loved the long chapter
thank you so much
i cant wait for the sequel
^^

i hope jack is found a put in a torture chamber! the sick bastard!!
she should really just be quiet. thats the only way to deal with psychos. be quiet unless you have a way to get away.

omg your story is AMAZING! please continue writting it!! and update soon! i check to see if you have updates every day, and it would be nice if you updated faster ^-^' but anyway, love the story!!

Loved the long chapter
and can't wait for the sequel
More soon, I NEED IT!

This story is freaking awesome i cant wait for the sequal Im sure thats gonna be pretty hot stuff to

awesome!!! update soon please

I didn't think that Jack felt that strongly about Riley though I think he was going to keep her.
I really can't wait for the sequel!!

Amazing chapter.

omg
its amazing( as always)
this story somehow keeps getting better and better
nicely done
i knew jack was gonna end up doing something like that
i cant wait for the update

OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for more!!! Update soon please(3

its so worth the wait