Deadly Perception - Comments

haha i think i have to comment one more time to be the 100th comment...sooooo

Awesome update!!! Poor Riley :(

My guess is that Riley is the surprise. Have fun in a box.
Jack is sick, perverted monster.
And my guess by Jack saying "soon enough" he means soon enough he'll have her... fully.
Ugh, I just thought about what Jack was saying and it sounds as if he plans on raping her infront of Nick.

They're going to stuff her into that box, right?
I can't wait for the next one.

UPDATE SOOOOOON

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh.
<3<3<3<3<3 it!
Amazinggg

you have to write more
like ninja fast
i wanna read a chapter before i leave for vacation
lol

loved the updates
more soon?

Ugh, whatever that "present" is, doesn't sound good. Especially for Riley.
All your foreshadowing is driving me nuts.
Whatever might happen isn't going to be good but I'm still holding hope for her. Stupid as she may have been to stay there in the first place.

omg
it keeps getting better and better
how is that possible
lol
i cant wait to see wat happens to riley and nick
they're such a cute couple
write more fast
^^

*gasp* poor riley...porr nick it's gonna be his birthday!! what the suprise???

awesome story

For some reason, I have some many ideas now about the virgin thing that Jack mentioned.
1) As I said before, Nick would work harder to get the money so she wasn't raped. But Jack must think that once she was... soddened, Nick wouldn't care as much to get her back.
2) Getting 'Memiors of a Geisha' on you here, Jack is going to auction off her, and virgins are like a shiny, brand new car instead of a hand-me-down bunker.
3) Jack's going to have her dance around in tiny, slushy (I don't like using derogatory terms or swearing) outfits in a strip club sort of thing so he could profit of her.

finally someone who is on riley's side (at least for now) two claps for sean the savior!


amayzing updates!! keep up the awesomely awesome updates!!!!!!!! :D

Why do I have a feeling her next outfit is going to be a lot less fabric? haha. If you know what I mean lol. UPDATE PLEASE I must know what's going to happen! I really like this story, keep writing! (:

I was good XD

Sean seems allright so far. Hope he doesn't turn out to be bad. :/

poor Riley! D :
Please give her a break?
I feel so bad for her!

Well at least she was able to get out of having to be watched by the other two scumbags. Well can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.

hey
thanks for dedicating that chapter
i feel loved
lol
it is really good(as always)
still cant wait to see wat happens
i like sean he's sweet