Deadly Perception - Comments

ohmygoshhh.!
whats gonna happen to rileyyy?
update soooon!

OMG
its amazing
keep writing
i wanna read more really soon
hurry
lol

You know, I don't think Nick would be able to come up with a large amount of money that quickly.
Oh, and this thought jsut occured to me... Mrs. O'kieff is not going to be happy. Even if she never finds out Jack and his croonies did it. She'd be so depressed!
Maybe, Jack will get into a fight with one of the guys over what they do with her and that creates such a distraction she's able to run away and save Nick. Then they could elope and change their names and be smart and stay out of the public eye.

o__o
Poor Riley!

nick and riley are like starcrossed lovers-so they HAVE to be all right in the end-right???? :P great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

where is Blaze taking her to???
I really want to find out what happens next so I hope you update soon.

i love this story cant wait for more!!!

I guessed right! It was #3. And I so got he Blaze thing right. Yeah!
Well, I guess it's not a "YEAH!" kind of moment because whatever is going to take place, but I'm still excited I had mad guessing skills. Ha ha.

o___o WOW.
Where are they talking Riley to? D:

Love the update
More real soon
I have got to know what they are going to do
Loved the dance scene with Blaze

kant wait to phind out who grabbed her

It's probably Jack... but watch as it's Blaze! That would be the most terrifying sight ever. He'll probably go gorilla on her and throw her over his shoulder and beat his chest. That would make me shudder.
I have three possible outcomes from the whole "Riley is going to learn the hard way" thing. 1- Riley will be physically/sexually assulted by either just Jack or Jack and all his buddies. 2- Nick will be physically hurt but not killed. 3- #1 & #2 will occur. Hopefully if #1 occurs, someone will step in right in the knick of time. If #3 occurs, it will most likely be because #1 was occuring then Nick stepped in and now #2 is occuring.

I'm officially obsessed with this!
I NEED more now
You NEED to update
That chapter was sooo cute. Loved it.
Can't wait to see who ruined the moment.

Dude, you better have a the next chapter lined up and waiting, because that was a mean way to end it! lol, seriously though, good job, i hope you keep writing XD

Please Update?

So you should update again, it's a bomb story.

:D
moree !
Aw, Nick seems adorable. :)
andd Jack and his friends are ultimate dicks. >.<

Poor Riley.
YAY NICK.

Love it!
awww the last part was cute
Ooh can't wait to see the night turn bad
More soon?

jack needs to DIE!