Alright, alright before I start I have to say that tears actually sprung from my eyes from this one. I love how you compared the city to the person' s eyes. I've read a lot of pieces that have involved eyes, they are almost common, but nothing like the. They always desribe the color or something, but this was just...I'm not ever sure. I think its amazing how you were able to capture the narrators two loves. I mean, if I'm on the right track at all I feel that the person belongs in a city, and I suppose belongs in this person eyes. I feel like it's a love story in the simplest form. It's truely beautiful. I loved all one hundred words. :arms:
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