Losing Grace - Comments

I think you did fabulously, considering your picture was quite difficult to work with.
The theme of the unknown character finding his grace was really good, and I enjoyed the story overall.

Read your journal.

The layout is extremely hard to read. Dark grey on a black background is never easy to read. I didn't even bother attempting to read it, I clicked the "default layout" button. The layout is really hard to read with a dark grey text and black background. Maybe white text would have been a better option?

I didn't really get what was going on in this story. It really confused me.

You've got good grammar.

Heyya, I read your journal, and thought, hell, why not comment. I thought your story was amazing, it really captured me, I could imagine what was happening and that is always important in stories. I could see how you have used the picture and the song in your story, and I wish you all the luck and hope you win. :o :D :mrgreen: :lol: :P