Poise and Rationality - Comments

I love the new layout by the way.... its amazing. And another bitter sweet chapter. I really am in love with it. The story line is still going strong and im way inticed. More soon love- im begging.

William Beckett.:

Victoria Flannel:

:cheese:

I love this! There's only one thing particularly I don't like, and that is the fact that you make Brendon the woman and Ryan the pants-wearer, when it's really the other way around.
<3

Wrong, Victoria. :file: We all know the truth.

Oh hell nauw. You're all bonkers. :file:

"...I want a baby..." It came as a whine. :cute: Awawawaw. I looooove this.

DUHHH, Ryan wears the pants. Monstercock, of course :coffee:

I like this a lot, smith, very many props to you :weird

Especially since Rydon and Frerard are my two favorite pairings in the world. When I read this I was like :cheese: the whole time.
You're a really good writer and if you don't continue with this, I might have to hunt you down and steal your peterick until you do :arms:

Victoria Flannel:

:cheese:

I love this! There's only one thing particularly I don't like, and that is the fact that you make Brendon the woman and Ryan the pants-wearer, when it's really the other way around.
<3

Wrong, Victoria. :file: We all know the truth.

SFYUISB 9DN HOW THE FUCK DID I NOT SEE THIS? DAMN YOU, SMITH! *shakes fist*
*is wanting Gabilliam right now*

PETERICK!
'nuff said.

wow- that was another really good chapter! a tad of comic relief isnt a bad thing =]
cant wait for more- i think im getting addicted... >:P
DAMN! if im addicted it means ill go through withdrawls if i dont have more soon! please dont make me go through withdrawls ^_^
beautiful work (G-Way is the only Way)

Oh, and of course I forgot to mention something; this reminds me so much of Desperate Housewives!

:cheese:

I love this! There's only one thing particularly I don't like, and that is the fact that you make Brendon the woman and Ryan the pants-wearer, when it's really the other way around.

And, for some odd reason, I seem to read this (inside my head) in this exaggerated British accent. Which makes me laugh everytime I think about it. :cute:

"Yea. Now, kiss me, they're looking." Brendon chuckled as he turned around and put his his arms around Ryan's neck.
<3

At the end when he says trust me it will be...
He means when Mikey said, up yours, right?
If so, thats hilarious!
Loved it!
And wow, I thought I commented on this. =(

oh my god.. thats depressing. i really love how this story is layed out and all the metophoric similarities between real world biggetry and a world of all this hate. I have gone through some of these overall feelings before, so im really looking foreward to this. more power to you. im really intrested and looking foreward to more. nice job... really

Ooooooooooo I like (:
Subscribing now haha
Update?? :3

This story is... interesting, to say the very least. I like it! I have subscribed, and I hope you'll update soon.

ok... subscribing now :D

I LOVE IT

That was real good :D

what?! only one??

it was good! dang! you should make it into a full lenght story!