The Beast and The Brain. - Comments

I hope you post soon. :)

It's been about ten minutes of waiting...and since I have been reading nonstop other than sleeping etc. I think I'm going through withdrawal. Help a sister out? ;)

I found your story yesterday and have not stopped reading since! It's amazing! I really hope you get it published...and finish it soon. 76 Chapters of amazing detail and insight! I love it. I hope you get some good writing done!
Haha I love the frogs just showing up. :P

I'm really excited about how they plan to get J

Now we're getting started! Two chapters, I'm proud. I'm glad we're picking up speed. I love attention to detail, but it was going a bit slow for a while there. Looking forward to the eventual battle. ;D

Frogs!! Yay! This is awesome... and two updates at once? Thumbs up!

Oh man, post another one! Especially if it's as original and different as this one!

Glad you updated. It seems Jay is rubbing off on Asher isn't she? :) But I'm a little worried about Jay. Hopefully you won't kill her off on us. :O And Its completely up to you whether you want to upload another story or not. Your readers will support you either way. :)

I'm glad this story is still going, I REALLY like it :)

I'm loving this Go Asher! But I have a strange feeling there's going to be some sort of horrible twist... maybe I'm just paranoid

Good job using your head Asher. first get intel on the swamp army of doom, then take 'em out. Then find J.

I forgive you for the wait. Though the chapter is pretty much just fill time. Asher's being very rational. I like that.

Awesome update, kinda short :P I can totally relate to Ashers pain, i got my wisdom teeth cut out and have been lying on the sofa in pain...the pain meds they gave me made me to sick so i have to deal with the pain without much help from pills. :( Update soon!

Cant wait for an update!

You better have the decency to give me a kick butt fight scene and some awesome Jay/Asher love because of all the pain you are putting poor Asher through.

Though, with that said, thank you for not making this some Indiana Jones-type awkward tale where Asher swoops in on a rope and just saves the day easy as that. He's trying to do something that most grown men weep at and that's admirable. I like the story more after seeing the struggle.

Are the frogs going to be important later? They seem just odd enough of a thing to be important later...

I can't wait to see what happens!!!

Oh God! It took me the entire day to read back and reclaim the feel of the story. But damn, Downy! This is amazing. I can't wait to see what it will bring. I can understand why he left, it's what she wanted. But knowing Asher he's going to do something... I can feel it in my bones. He's not gonna leave her to suffer.

I love how this is written. It's easy to follow and flows amazingly (:

Just finished this and I am just speechless. To day as I was going about my day all I could think about this story.please update soon!