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  • MildlyInsane

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    NOOOOOOOOO!! Whyyy did he leave herr! >_< Dammit asher, u should have grabbed her and rannn. XD I love the update tho, u got me all worked up and excited for the next one. XD
    February 2nd, 2012 at 11:59pm
  • Blackness

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    I'm very confused of why he left J. He kisses her to show that he loves her then he leaves her? I am very happy that he finely kissed her though. You are not going to end this story with one of them dying or them not being together right? Anyway, I can definitely say it was no where near predictable, which is a very good thing! :) Hope you update soon...Before it drives me crazy, waiting for you to update.
    February 2nd, 2012 at 04:10pm
  • PeaceOutDude123

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    Oh my gosh!! They finally kissed!!!! But that doesn't make up for the fact that he LEFT her. There better be some sort of reunion coming soon or I will be a very unhappy camper. Very unhappy. But I still love the update, beginning to end. Please don't leave so much space next time (even though I completely understand, lol). =)
    February 1st, 2012 at 11:33pm
  • iyah101

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    You made us wait so long for this and now you split them up?!?

    I'm not even sure if the kiss makes up for how ridiculously frustrated I feel. Oh, but Asher is a BAMF and I love him.

    And, THE KISS, THE KISS! I love the kiss and now we all know what your cover pic is referencing.
    February 1st, 2012 at 11:03pm
  • sam4ever

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    This last chapter was amazing!!! I can't believe that Asher actually left J thought, it was so shocking and I cant wait to see what the next chapter holds! :)
    February 1st, 2012 at 10:24pm
  • ArgonXRoses

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    Nooooo!!!! I waanted fire breathing dragon wrath to rain down on the swamp!!! nooo. why why why?!!? Arrrrrrgh. okay... fine! be that way. Please update soon so that we all don't start a bloody riot.
    February 1st, 2012 at 06:12pm
  • worldclass

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    Yay!!!!!! So happy with The Kiss in this chapter :)))) (And so glad you finally updated :))
    February 1st, 2012 at 11:03am
  • Ice_Cat

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    I'm only on chapter 18 but I must say I'm impressed. The story is great! You've also seem to have been around horses a bit.
    October 27th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • Blackness

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    YAY!! I finely had time to read! I love this story it is so awesome. Will we find out J's real name soon? Can't wait to read what happens next!!
    October 20th, 2011 at 07:39pm
  • cookieZZ

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    Wahhhhhhhhhhhhh, OH MY GOODNESS. I can't wait untill Asher makes his move. I was going squeeeeeee at the last seconds just now, then epic dissapointment followed. But I guess that's all part of the suspense! You really do know how to leave us hanging, eh...

    J's an idiot sometimes, though she doesn't realise it. But she is. I mean, come on. Asher's a great guy. :P And he saved them by dropping her, why can't she see that? Haha.
    October 16th, 2011 at 04:11pm
  • worldclass

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    Ahhhhh! This is great. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
    October 14th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • lala1234142

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    oh, and I think you were right, J's first offical kiss with Asher should not be one filled with deer blood....
    October 13th, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • lala1234142

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    First, oooo! Now isn't Asher just the lover-boy!!!

    HOW COULD YOU DITCH US!!!! I WAS DYING AT THE END OF THE LAST CHAPTER!!!! It's okay, you were busy.... applying for college is terribly lengthily... I feel your pain. And adding work and homework time is definitely not fun.. I do hope you update soon!!!! :D
    October 13th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • ArgonXRoses

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    Ew... bloody deer kiss. yucky. But don't you worry Asher, o' dragon boy. You'll get your chance, you wayward lover. tsk.

    m o r e s o o n p l e a s e

    p.s. I Love Doctor Who!
    October 13th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • Queen-of-Spades

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    Great chapter! I also read that you were applying for Bible colleges? That's exciting :) theres a couple here were I'm at, Boise Bible College and Frontier in Wyoming, maybe check them out? Good Luck!
    October 13th, 2011 at 04:04pm
  • Fading-Away

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    I want beast and the brain to go on for ages, cause I love it.
    I also really like Terra... Please don't desert me...?
    October 13th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • TiredofQuizilla

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    Hey! Its been quite a long time. When are you updating?
    October 4th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • airox88

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    Cliffhanger? or... non-cliff dragon almost hanger? Ok, so Asher better roast that duckling!
    September 1st, 2011 at 03:18am
  • ArgonXRoses

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    AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! How have I been missing this?! Oh dearest author, i am so so sorry that i wasn't getting the updates. but oh wow. I am SO! glad that i've caught up. and now there's a cliff hanger and J is going to chain him to a rock for eternity.
    So awesome!
    August 30th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • cookieZZ

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH, I'm so sorry I took so long but I've been swamped with my beast's upcoming obedience exams. Aka, dog training :P. For the rest, I really have no excuse. I didn't expect you to have a update-splurge! Jeez, give a woman a warning, would ya. Haha!

    I'm soooo excited. I'll start with Wisdom. I love him. I love him love him love him to bits for telling Asher J's all fluttery for 'm. Hehe. I have noticed (more than usual) typos in the last 3 chapters, so you might want to pay a teeny bit more attention. ''Put as but'' for example, I think. Can't really remember but I know I noticed them. I'm excited J finally rode Asher, but now I'm going all ''ARGH, ASHER YOU IDIOT WHY DO YOU BETRAY HER SO?!'' because he let her fall. She's bound to give him hell and if I didn't know you better, I'd swear she will really chain him to a rock and leave him to rot and wallow in regret.

    But ofcourse that won't happen. I hope... I think... We'll see...
    August 22nd, 2011 at 05:03pm