My Summer Love Story - Comments

The quote in chapter 21 of this story is from Dodgeball: A True Underdog Story!!! Great story by the way!!!!

Wow. This story is REALLY great! I love the story line and the fact that she has enemies AND two guys to chose from! It's great, and you have some really gunny comebacks! =P

Some constructive criticism: Put a little bit more detail into them, and PLEASE make them longer! =)

When does the next one come out?

yay!! i'm so happy that you're updating again! it's a great story, keep it up!

I adore this story(:
I dont understand why you have so few comments!

yay! you dedicated it to me! thanks! and yes, charlie brown does rock! great chapter but i suggest this. spend as much time as you want on the next chapter. you can make it as long and un-choppy and detailed as you want. and don't log onto mibba until your ready to post it cuz you'll probably get a lot of comments saying "post another chapter damn you!" (okay, not exactly that) btw i'm not saying that the chapter was choppy or undetailed or anything. just a helpful tip. its what i do for my stories which is why i don't update for a long time sometimes. happy writing!

so me being slow, i just read your last chapter (good by the way) and read the author's note and even though christmas was like four days ago, it didn't feel like christmas at all. i watched the charlie brown christmas specials to get in the christmas spirit but it still didn't feel like christmas : /

yayyy, thankyou for the ded. to that chapter (:
great update, as always..cant wait for more.
oh jeez dont get me started on blades of glory, that movie is so good :D
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Haha yet another wonderful update (:

HOLY SHIT A CHAPTER DEDICATED TO ME!!!!
No one has ever done that before :D
I loved the update.

I died when I saw the title, I was like "DODGEBALL!"
I'm a huge Justin Long fan so, that movie is a fav of mine (:

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

love it so far(:..sorry i havent actually commented that much, i'm too forgetful :/
the quotes from dodgeball isnt it? [:
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love it so far(:..sorry i havent actually commented that much, i'm too forgetful :/
the quotes from dodgeball isnt it? [:
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Awe i got this chapter! <3 ya.
Updates, cuz i will get annoying. xD

Awwww:/ nice chapter:D

Update soon:)

The chick from above kinda does remind me of liv too:p. O.o

Also I know a girl named Liv who TOTALLY reminds me of Liv in the story
here's a pic..

This story rules.
also my name is Jacqueline Marie ;P

Hahaha. bugs in your boxers:p. LOL. Hahaha that was funny:p. Is she really gonna do it?? O.o
Loved the new chapter :D. Update soon^^

Omg i just finished the last chapter and i DEMAND a update, not want DEMAND. lol xD
I love this hunny. (btw this Cade guy sounds hawt i wanna take him home! lmao)

Dayum! Girl you can write!! unlike me lol keep doing what cha do <3

Ughh!!!! And all this time i was hoping nothin' bad happened to olive. Olivia. Whatever. Anwayyyy. loved the updates.!!!! Hehe. They were cuute^^

Aww you dedicated a chapter to me! You're too sweet. =] :hug:

Oh boy oh boy do I want to slap Olivia around with a tree branch right now... I must say all worries for her went out the window when she treated everyone like that. What. A. Cow. As far as I know hitting a guy on the head and knocking him out isn't a way to woo him. >.> Ungreatful little betch too. If they didn't come after her she'd still be there starving her little (I imagine fake tanned) body. :XD Sorry I'm rambling...

Anyway. Cade is such a cutie. I can't wait for more!