My Summer Love Story - Comments

Aw the typical summer camp love story. I love it already. :XD Although I'm kinda worried about this Olivia girl even if I still kinda hate her for her romantic past with Cade. Lol.

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wooahhh!! hahah :P cool ...how'd u come up with the songs:P hehe...well anywayss...keep updating ^^

Oh. Damm , i hope nothin bad happened to olive... Like , get eatn' by a bear or. Something:/.... Haha ,,, olive... Wird name..... But it sounds cool:D
Anyyywayyys update sooooooon :D hehe

I absolutely love it!!! Update soon please!!!

I really like this story. Please update soon!

Umm yeah, i tend to write like conversations instead of comments :p hehe

Heeyyy!!! I just noticed that the hour that mibba puts in my comments is wrong! Itsactually like 6:20 in the morning! Yeahh i just woke up like an hour ago. And just in time to watch the sunrise ^^ its really fun to read and watch the sunrise:)

Hmmm.... Ok......oh! I got it! I think this was really cute haha:p poor alex... But anywayss.... That made six comments so now u must update. Muajajajajajajajaja. Yes i have been known to be evil. :p ok... Hehe. Yeah, ima bit crazzy:p
Well anywhooo. Update soon

Ive always wanted to go to camp..... Never happened...haha:p but with stories like this i guess now i know whats its like :)

I really like the layout:D

I really like it ;) period :p

ok so that story is really good i like the fact that you change point of views it helps know what people are thinking and helps with their personality more...love it keep writing

I love it so far! :) It's definitely a page turner, kept wanting to read more and more. Keep writing it PLEASE, this has potential.

lol cute story

the narration is brilliant, i love the countdown part, it makes a change from just like a block of writing :')
but i agree, just a bit more scene description and this'll be ace :D
really good so far though, keep it up :)

I think it's great. Although you may want to change the background because it's really hard to read the story without highlighting the whole thing.

It's a good story line but try and put more detail into the scenes and about her mother. We still don't quite understand whether she's the spolit brat or whether her mother is just plain mean. Looking forward to more!