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  • hkittyly

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    *Looks up*
    Trust me Britt, since he is coming to the concert...
    I think Katy would like this. I love how you made her so much like myself, and I think it would make her laugh. Calling you "lover boy" was espeically funny.
    Of course, in reality, Katy is not that much like me in personality. She has more of a heart to show, and that last line you said would, in fact, get you thrown off of a cliff. But either way, including her in this chapter as you did would be a definite plus if she ever read it. Maybe I shall show it to her.
    May 24th, 2009 at 02:49pm
  • Darkest Spells

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    good chapter lol
    *covers eyes* i don't want to see you guys sucking face!!!!
    haha im joking lol
    loved it. more soon?
    May 24th, 2009 at 03:32am
  • IfYouWereUs

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    hella awesome chapter!!! this is still my fav story by far!
    aw don't get sick! ~looks up~ Omg is that her?!
    May 18th, 2009 at 05:16am
  • hkittyly

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    Vincent! >.< You should have gone to sleep! As much as I appreciate/ truly love the chapter, I must scold you for doing that to yourself. I do not want you getting ill, especially because of a story. Though the whole "in a towel" thing definitely piques my interest.
    But *shakes head* dirty mind aside, I can't have my boyfriend getting sick. It would mean that I have to go down there and make you chicken soup, which I am not very good at.
    I hope your next chapter will not threaten you so. And I- and by I I mean your other readers- are definitely eager to see what happens next.
    May 17th, 2009 at 04:19pm
  • Darkest Spells

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    good chapter. i hate cold mornings haha. and i can't believe you wrote that freezing cold. more soon?
    May 17th, 2009 at 03:56pm
  • IfYouWereUs

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    sick story =)))))) this is the first ive commented on the site, and i love it
    if alli's a real person she must be ;ucky
    more soon please!!!!!
    May 7th, 2009 at 01:05pm
  • Darkest Spells

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    first, haha to ali's comment lol
    and her mom scares me so you were right about her lol.
    and don't do anything at the river that i wouldn't do... lmao
    awesome update. more soon?
    May 6th, 2009 at 09:35pm
  • hkittyly

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    Hmm, I suppose I should comment this as well.
    Locked door? Is there some sort of suggestion there?
    Oh, what will little Ali do?
    *Rests hands behind head, relaxed*
    You know, for a moment as I was reading it, I was thinking of how to reply- and then I realized ithis was not an rp. This is great; no work done by myself and yet i get to reap the benefits of a wonderful story. I hope this never ends.

    By the by, I also loved the fact that I won, even in the story. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
    May 4th, 2009 at 05:47am
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    woo hoo chapter 2!!!
    dun dun dunnnnnnn will ali let you stay the night or will you have to find a place to stay???
    cliff hanger!!!!!!
    more soon?
    May 4th, 2009 at 04:44am
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    Clap wow that was REALLY good. i hope you update this.
    i'm subscribing to this.
    and seriously it's really good : ]
    more soon?
    May 3rd, 2009 at 07:23pm