My Guardian Angel - Comments

Awesome story.

But I'm just letting you know some things that would make it even better.
Well to start you have your character keep switching between guys and it starts to get confusing.
Second it would be easier not have soon much new information in a chapter's for it also starts to get confusing.
That's all. But remember its only a suggestion and it's your story.

Update. Update. Update. Update

keep on writing =]

See i thought I messed that up! I'm sorry you're right. I haven't written it in so long so I guess I forgot. Every time I wrote that I kept thinking, that's not right. Was that his name? But I don't know why I didn't go back and check.

Thanks a lot : ) I'll fix it now.

I love your story, its just that i thought violets fiance/boyfriend's name was will and his dads name was greg

i will : ) you seem to be the only one reading it though but i'll still continue

wow. nice mini twist! keep on writing =]

keep on writing =]

love the story so far PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!! XD

lol adding another guy into the pot? cant wait to see how this turns out! keep on writing more!

SOOO CUUTE! KEEP ON WRITING!

CANT WAIT UNTIL HER PLAN GOES INTO ACTION! KEEP ON WRITING MORE!

I love the story! Its soo cool that Vic also hates school like I do, that's the best part about her! :D update soon!!

lmao i think she should like.. meet someone new!! lmao but i'm on the fence.. i cant choose D:

soo cute <3 write asap!

oh man.... torn between two guys... that sucks... KEEP ON WRITING MORE!!!

awwwwwww i hope damien and victoria can get married <3
keep on writing!

i really like it!

wow! you're on a roll!! keep them coming!!! =D amazing!

DAMIENS GOTTA GO SAVE THEM!!!!!! MORE!!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!