The Walls Caved In - Comments

awwww!!! thats sooo cute!!!! especially how he specifically went to the same college as her =D
thanks for writing this!!! =]

It's overrrrrrrr. D:
To be honest, I thought the ending seemed kind of rushed. The whole thing was just amazing, but the last two chapter were sorta crammed together. Like suddenly it's prom, and then it's the second prom, and then she's at college… I don't know. Maybe it's just me. Maybe it would be better if I re-read it. Maybe it's too good to be this much bothered with details. Bleh.

The ending is cute. Scratch that, the whole story is cute. It's just so cute. I love it, really. I'll miss it. You writing anything else? Nudge nudge, wink wink (:

Okay. So I just read the whole fricken amazing thing. Haha I loved it! : D

i love this story! but i don't get the divorce part......... in the last chapter it says they've been through divorced parents...... did joyce's parents get divorced in the story??

just found this story.
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!
update soon please :)

You and me both on the April thing. Except I've just gotten back in the groove, and apparently so have you!
I'm really glad this is back, btw. (: Yay Eric for standing up for her!

So glad you updated! Hope to see another one soon! They're so cute!

omg casey i just started reading this and i effing love it. eric seems adorable.

Chapter 20: When they were first talking, you had me scared that she was going to walk away.
I was yelling at the computer like, "NO JOY! GET YOUR MAN BACK, NO STAY THERE!"

She must have listened to me or something, mhmm. ;D Or she listened to her heart...
But even though that was cliche it was so cute and perfect! You don't realize how happy I am!

Chapter 19: I love how you put crying and rain in the same chapter. I don't know, that's just cool to me.
And how you described the feeling of crying and afterward... Well that's exactly how I feel.

Then it made me sad because everything just seemed to be going wrong for Joy. BUT ERIC SHOWED UP!
I was not expecting that at all, he was like a knight in shining armor. :)
The end was probably one of my favorite parts of the story. When she realized he was looking out for her.

IT WAS SO SWEET <3
I'm glad to see them together.

Haha, it is cliche. Adorably so, though. Cliche-ness is good every once in awhile.
I enjoy it, at least. (:
& I'm looking foreword to more.

That one was so adorable, I can't find words to describe it =)
Thank you for updating.

I really liked this one- keep the updates up? It makes a girl like me quite happy. :D

LOVE IT. That's my honest opinion.

^ God, okay, THAT showed up weird, too, but you get the gist of it. Stupid no preview or edit button DX.

Sorry, this showed up weird:

Make sure you watch the BBCode, you have to do the if you want to end italics. That was somewhere in there… yeah; I had closeted myself in the house for too long, and I [i]needed[i] to be out.

So apparently this sounded promising when I discovered it, cause I subscribed. (:
I will now read it through and write this as I do.

2: when the boy without a name (yet) got her number… "How about Joy, instead?" He continued to click buttons on his phone, before shitting it. "Thanks again, Joy."
That seriously made my day, thank you. I'm taking it that he shut it, not shit it, although I'd personally just leave it there. XD
& I like the metaphor at the end of the chapter.

Whoa, my name's Allison. It's weird to read x). Except not many people call me Alli(e), so…

So this is really random and holds no real purpose, but I really love the triangle things you use for breaks. They look really cool. I like the whole layout in general, actually.

7: He didn't dwell, either. Instead he went on talking about today's plans full speed, wandering aloud if we should take the interstate North or South. Wondering aloud, not wandering.

I've gotta say, I pretty much love Eric already. He's so buoyant. (:

Oh oh, one thing: when someone asks a question, you're not supposed to capitalize after that. Like, "What?" he asked, instead of, "What?" He asked.

DUDE, I PLAY SOCCER TOO. This sister of hers has quite a few similarities to me. 0.o

:( Eric's friends are lame-sauce.
& Eric's a LOSER for not apologizing right away! Jesus, idiot! xP

17: first paragraph after the break, it's pour her heart out, not poor.
& I'm a little confused as to what happened there… It's phrased funny. Alli had a boy in her room?

XD Isabelle is hilarious. Her little weird shouts. It's cute. (:

19: Awwww, he followed her home!
Which is part creepy, but part sweet. haha
Make sure you watch the BBCode, you have to do the if you want to end italics. That was somewhere in there… yeah; I had closeted myself in the house for too long, and I needed to be out.

Welllllll what I think of this, (in answer to the A/N and this long-ass comment) is that it's pretttttyyy good. & I'm most definitely looking foreword to more. So keep 'em coming! :D

OMFG.
get them back together right now.
that little girl scene where she said they were 'MFEO'
was so cute.


rara! I loved it.

i love this !