The Walls Caved In - Comments

  • orlando weeks.

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    Awww.
    I wanna hug ya and kiss ya and take you out
    That was the best line I have ever read, ever.
    I wish someone said that to me. :cute:
    September 8th, 2009 at 04:25am
  • stay awake;

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    Yes! I'm glad that Joyce admitted she likes Eric.
    They would be such a cute couple. :]
    September 8th, 2009 at 12:25am
  • stay awake;

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    Eric *insert middle name here* Jackson is my favorite fictional boy ever. He's got so much personality and I just love it.
    And I'm glad that Joy is breaking out of her shell around him, it makes me quite happy. :]
    August 11th, 2009 at 08:00pm
  • bitterxperfume

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    I like this story....it is refreshingly original
    August 9th, 2009 at 07:59pm
  • orlando weeks.

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    OMG.
    Sooo cuteee. :tehe:
    Eric is adorable and sweet and I even love his mom.
    srsly, why must he be fictional?
    August 8th, 2009 at 04:54pm
  • blue jay.

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    I love, love, LOVE the way Joy thinks!
    is that terrible of me?

    oh, and Eric is adorable. Just reading about him gives me a sense of happiness :)
    August 3rd, 2009 at 08:08am
  • whoeversheis;

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    so i saw this while i was looking for a good read.
    and i must say...this is quite good.
    No, its fucking amazing. (:

    keep on writing?

    In Love Thunder

    ps. I've got a fan girl crush on Eric <3
    August 2nd, 2009 at 12:48am
  • mr. owl

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    It is not even fair how amazing your writing is.
    I love it.

    every last word.

    (:
    July 31st, 2009 at 05:29am
  • stay awake;

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    I reallyreally like this. :]
    Especially because you make Joy seem so real and like she's not just some character.
    And I can't even begin to explain how much I like Eric. He's awesome, I love him.
    July 15th, 2009 at 03:46am
  • orlando weeks.

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    I liked this. :D
    We learned more about her as a person.
    July 12th, 2009 at 10:57pm
  • mr. owl

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    Wow. :)
    This is a really great story so far.
    Completely original.
    I like it :)
    June 26th, 2009 at 06:39am
  • orlando weeks.

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    really great.
    I really like Eric's character.
    <333love it.
    June 25th, 2009 at 06:10pm
  • orlando weeks.

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    perfect example of my sister and I....
    except she's like the Alli even though she's older.
    June 9th, 2009 at 02:18am
  • myperfectsonnet

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    I absolutely love this! It's a wonderful story. Seriously, it's well written and has a good plot... I like how Eric serenaded Joy (; It was funny/cute. Sooo please update soon ;D
    May 15th, 2009 at 05:07am
  • orlando weeks.

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    greattt...
    now imma think of Eric Lambert.
    goddamn hot gingers. D:

    ps. this was really cute.
    he seems like a ball of joy.
    May 15th, 2009 at 02:02am
  • myperfectsonnet

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    Awh I really like this! It's a good story and I'm subscribing ;D
    His name? Oh how about... Eduardo. Antoine. Chino. Pino. Montana.
    UPDATE SOON ;D
    PS; those were all joke names, so only use them if you want to xD
    May 13th, 2009 at 04:55am
  • orlando weeks.

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    D':

    iLike.
    May 9th, 2009 at 11:37pm
  • orlando weeks.

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    mmmmmm boy names.

    ;Tommy;Jeremy;Falcon;Damien;Billward;Connor;Liam;Ron;Billy;Joe;Gabriel;David;Gavin;Michael;Ryan;Steve;Arthur;Gage;Mark.... i fail. D:
    May 8th, 2009 at 04:56am
  • cry me a river

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    i like it!!
    c'mon keep posting.
    ADD moment: name him Georito. XD jay kay, jay kay.

    i like it, though. keep it uppp. :3
    May 8th, 2009 at 01:21am
  • orlando weeks.

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    iiiiiii like it.
    i think this may be the first time that i wasn't the first comment.
    WTF?!
    damn, i'm losing my shizz.

    ps. im subscribing.
    May 7th, 2009 at 04:59am