Namaste - Comments

This is a really wonderful story!
I was shocked (plesantly!) to see that she was from Tulalip!
I was born in Spokane, and raised on the rez, so that's just a wonderful thing to see. =]
I looove this story so far, I'm excited to finish it!

I finally watched the cabbie interview where he talks about his gf, and cabbies kind of an asshole. Also I feel sorry for any girl who thinks she can snare kaner.... he seems like a playa

I LOVED THIS STORY!

One of my favorites for sure, it was awesome!

Cant wait to read more of your work!

Im so glad you decided to write this story! Cant wait for the sequel and the mischeif she'll get into there and with Patrick.

Amazing story =)

I really enjoyed this. Like Erin said, it's something totally different to everything else, and it all came from a deam!

KEJUHGURGVHREUGV. I'm so glad she found a job in Chicago and can stay with Patrick. Steeger's little line was adorable. I can't wait to read the sequel. This is definitely one of my favorite stories on here.

(OH, but, PS. THE CUBS?! UIHGUERW. EW. Lmfao.)

That was a perfect ending to that story! Personally, I would have chosen the White Sox, but what can you do, lmfao!

Anyways, you know that I adore each and every single thing you write, but this may truly be my absolute favorite. It was so different from anything else that anyone has written, and I enjoyed each and every chapter of it! I'm so glad you're making a sequel, and I'll be on the lookout for it! This story was absolute perfection! Amazing, my dear!!

Aw, it's the end!! (But YES, THERE'S A SEQUEL!!)

I thought it was sweet of Patrick to make her choose her job, and it was nice of Haber to get her another job, even if it is with the...Cubs. (Yes, that was a jab. Probably the only one I'll EVER give you, haha!)

I am sooo excited for the sequellll!

im sad this story is over i completely fell in love with it but i'm totally looking forward to the sequel.

There are so many things I love about this, Patrick and hot sex included.
But the thing I love most is the raw passion, and how realistic it is. It's not like she hates him and he wins her over, it's not like she just forgets everything and they live happily ever after. She dislikes him for a while but that passion is still there, and she wants him, the whole 'I hate you right now, but fuck me' idea, that's what makes it so real, and I like it.
And I wonder what that meeting's about...

Oh my! First of all, that was hot sex. MMM. I love love love this story. He LOVES her!!! Oh my. I can't wait for the next (and last) chapter!!

Oh wow. I'm freakin speechless, -Which is hard to do, I might add- and this is like the millionth time you've made it happen, haha!

That sex scene was muy caliente, and I loved how they spooned on the living room floor!!

Oh goodness. I'm nervous about this meeting she's getting called in for. I hope it's nothing bad!!

Can't wait for more!! =)

Oh yay for a sequel!
I love how they're working it out, I love how Adam said to take baby steps, I love all of it.

Okay so I know I haven't commented before because most of the time I couldn't formulate a decent comment in my head (I'm one of those people who would rather have a comment saying what I liked about it rather than the cliched - I love it, etc). This story is amazing. It's such a different plot line and it is mature. It's realistic and I really like that. I've been reading for a while now but just couldn't get a comment down. It's a great story, I really enjoyed reading it and I'm very much looking forward to the sequel! =D

Aw, Patrick's little speech there at the end was freaking amazing! I can't wait to see how Ana reacts to it!

And, a sequel??? I am so excited now!! You sure know how to make a girl's day, don't you =)

Yayyy they're working things out!! I LOL'd at Adam with the "baby steps" thing, haha

AND OMFG. SEQUEL???!!!???

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!

EPIC. WIN.

=)))

YAY FOR A SEQUEL! I love this story so much it's almost ridiculous. :D

Patrick makes me giggle and squee and swoon, and just. gah!!! This story kills me in the most wonderful way.

More soon!!

Only a few more chapters? Gah. I LOVE this.
So, I'm glad everything is out in the open, but they need to get together.
And Adam is so sweet.

Just found this story, thought I'd drop in and tell you how much I am lovin' it =]
Glancing through others' comments, I agree with all of them, so I won't bore you and restate things you've already read =]

Oh my gosh!!! Only a few more chapters??? =(

I love this story so much!

Well, at least she let him explain himself, and even though I totally get that she's still angry, THEY NEED TO GET BACK TOGETHER!!!

I'm glad you had fun on your trip!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!