Namaste - Comments

damn that was so hot! no not a short hiatus! i like the daily updates lol! god sharpie is amazing!!

DAAamn.

How can you end it like that, and then say you're going on a small hiatus???

BLAH.

I can't even think straight, that chapter has my head all jumbled.

It was good though, very good. I'm worried about Adam though...what's going on there?

God, Sharpie is A SEXY BEAST!

Well, if you must be on hiatus until Sunday, at least you left us with a good ending for the time being, haha! But, I seriously hope you get to sneak in a couple of updates while you're in Toronto. Have fun, by the way!

And, I'm wondering why Adam's so upset. Is it because he likes Ana or for some other reason?? I can't wait to find out! I'll be looking forward to your next update, whenever that might be =)

This story is ridiculously intense and amazing! Yay for them finally getting together.

You...TEASE!

Oh my god, when Patrick said "What are you wearing?", my eyes got SO WIDE. I always thought that was so cheesy, but when Sharpie said it, OMG. *Swoon*

And although I felt gipped, I do like that Patrick wants to take things slow and actually start something with her.

And Patrick gettng her a too small shirt? Nice, haha.

I love this story!! Update sooooon =))

Aw, they're finally together! Granted, I would have liked to have seen Ana's fantasies come true, haha.

And, I'm wondering what's going to happen when someone from the organization finds out about they're relationship!

I loved it. It definitely cheered me up when the Blackhawks were losing. Hopefully, this can bring Sharpie some luck and they can come up with the win, haha! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

You're killing me with the whole THEM NOT DOING IT thing. UGH. Lmfao!! I love love love that they are SO sexually attracted to each other, but it's morphing into something more.. So amazing.

Update soooooon?

:D

Am I the only one who feels cheated?!?! I was SO ready for some hot closet...*ahem* mature content!!! UGH that is SO uncool. Cmon now, it's Patrick. You can't do this to us...

"You’re in my head. I can’t get you out. These fantasies. I have to focus on hockey."
LMAO that's freakin' hilarious. Does he think it'll get any better AFTER dragging her into a closet?! Although I do like the nice touch with the stuffed dog. A little cliche, but it's cute. Next thing you know, he's going to start buying her...things for him to see...=P hey, cmon now. You can't have a story this sexually charged and not expect the readers to get this way now. Or maybe I just need to get laid. Either way, I think some Patrick sexy-time is in order, don't you? OMG they should totally go take a yoga class together and just like, forget the class =P Hahaha okay I'll stop being a perv. But seriously, I love this story. Who would have thought he was having fantasies too? Are they as vivd as hers I wonder? Oh man, please update again soon! I'll leave more entertaining comments if you do... =]

Oh freeking baby!!!

woah intense!

Patrick in tight, white boxers? Wowz.
Patrick in a closet, fantasising about HER too? Wowz.
Combining those two for the next chapter would be great, yeah? :D

Okay, look. Since this is a 'mature' story, I hope you don't mind a 'mature' comment. THIS STORY TURNS ME ON SO BAD. Lmfaoooo. Like, the sexual tension there. Oh god. He fantasizes about HER too! Good lord woman! IN THE CLOSEST? WHEWWW. Is it hot in here or is it just me? lmfaooooo.

You. Are a tease.

And I love it.

HE HAS FANTASIES ABOUT HER TOO???

OH JEEBUS.

So close!! They were SO. CLOSE.

Ugh.

It's only a matter of time now though, right?

And how cute was Patrick buying her the stuffed dog?? Oh god, I love this story.

Update soooooon =))

Aww, so damn close! At least she knows that he feels the same way. I can't wait to see what happens the next time the two of them are left alone together!

And, that was so sweet of Patrick to get her that stuffed dog! I loved the update, and I can't wait for more!!

I'm not going to lie, I totally don't follow the Black Hawks. It's a Canadian thing =P But I TOTALLY know what she's going through; well, sort of. Not exactly, but hockey players are the shit.
This story is so interesting. I love how it wasn't the typical I've-loved-him-secretly-for-a-billion-years thing. It was actually pretty entertaining to read about her random fantasies about a guy she didn't even recognize (right away) haha. And I love filler chapters, by the way. I actually HATE people who just rush their stories so that people go from strangers to best-relationship-in-the-world in like, 3 chapters. I'm glad you're taking the time to build your characters and the plot. It makes the story that much more realistic and engaging. I can't wait to see what happens!

Oh god. Patrick filling out his boxer briefs?? *dirty thoughts*

Seriously. This girl has some mad will power. MAD WILL POWER.

And, do you know how excited I was to read that you might post again later tonight?? I HOPE YOU DOOO. hehe

=)

Gosh, I love this story. You write sexual tension so good. This story is absolutely killing meeeeee. I do hope you post another chapter tonight!! I would love this story!!

<3

Sometimes those "filler chapters" are the best ones! I love how Adam just randomly changes topics in order to not tell her how he got Patrick to agree to the event!

And, mmmm...Patrick in boxer briefs. The image is now etched in my mind...and I like it, haha!

I can't wait for the next chapter, especially with your little note at the end. And, believe me, I'll remind you to post it if you forget, haha!

"I graduated early, then went to the University of Washington, and now here I am." In a hotel room with a man I'm having wet dreams about." --OMG. LMAO. That was amazing! hahaha

Ooh, Sharpie all interested in her, wanting to know more. And "approving" her lingerie. Awkwaarrd!

Oh gosh, I love this story. Keep up the good work!!