Daylight - Comments

haha joe is so excited to get it in!

An update!!! Yayy! <333

You know I'll always be waiting for another chapter. Loved this short one, lots of emotion and the way you describe Sal's walk is so funny...

"I smiled, wanting to clutch the phone to my chest like some crazy chick with a letter in an old movie."

Wow do I love that line! Your writing is so fresh and fun. Know I've told you time and time before but I just love this story and the way you write. More soon, please.

aw protective daughter :) loved it

What a great chapter. I really liked the conversation in the car and how Viv handled it so well. I'm glad she and Joni seem to respect each others feelings about Billy. Can't wait for more.

*so many chapters : )

I really do like Viv's story and every chapter regardless of the subject is written beautifully. However, 'Daylight' 's summary is only of Petula which I feel has become false advertising with so many chapter about Viv. I would love to hear more about Pet, she's such a fantastic character!

yay for viv and billy! loved this chapter

Loved loved loved this chapter. Good for her....following her heart is the way to go. Can't wait for next chapter.

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Just spent the last two days catching up on this story whenever I got a chance, and now it's like, my drug.
Its the icing to my cake, the air to my lungs, the Pet to my Joe.
I've flailed in excitement more in the past two days then I have in my life.
And with that, I leave you and await an update.
Good day madam.

LOL A lot of times I'd like to ask Gerard what the hell is going on with his hair. Great chapter but I love this story so much I read it way too fast then I'm sad when I reach the end of the chapter. Glad to see there will be more soon.

Poor Viv...let's all face it love can be scary but damn she's just gotta face it. I really hope she goes and finds Billy. They need to talk things through. More soon, PLEASE!

What is Viv so worried about, life is filled to burstin point with if, buts and maybes.
Its making these risky choices that allow us to grow as a person, and sure there'll be broken hearts and promises, but lifes an adventure you have to experience with the safety off.

Please update again soon!!!

come now joe dont go getting all jealous. you can hi to mcr too!

Well FINALLY an update...Loved how poor Joe was upset she had just sorta forgot to tell him about meeting Billy and Gerard. Can't wait until MCR shows up to see the show. Hoping that will be soon!

You were right it was totally worth going back and reading the "missing" chapter. Love it! Damn, this story is good and I am in love with Billy.

I only found this story today and have already fallen completely in love with it! Every so often I type original band into the search and just click on the first one,, but never before now, have any been good. And then it just goes from nothing to absolutely fucking epic with just one story! I really cant wait to see what happens I have two theories on two different things youve mentioned briefly in the story

1-Does Vivian turn out to be Petulas real mother?

2-Wre the two girls she heard Mo and Sal by any chance? She said the voices were familiar and they did kiss when Sal dressed as a guy.

~lauren

Just "WOW". Reading this chapter was a great way to start the morning. Totally got my blood to pumping. LOL

LOL at Bandit pulling Gerard's hair....you go girl. Loved the update and the way you brought Gerard and Lindsey into the story...very real. Can't wait for more.