haha well that's an interesting way to start off a story in a good way of course Kennedy seeing her naked in the water I can honestly say I've never seen that happen in the first chapter before.
It's a different start, and I'm interested to see how everything plays out as the story goes on
Oh wow, talk about awkward. I like this. The way you write it is really different, and I'm curious to hear how their relationship will change throughout this. And the way they meet is just really entertaining, because I can totally visualize how uncomfortable that situation would be and can't wait for more :]