'Cause the Chicks Dig It - Comments

Amazing job as always doll! <3

I absolutely adored it! You're an amazing writer!

I can't wait for your next brilliant idea!

All good things must go to the end....i loved the whole story! Great amazing job! Can't wait for more from you! =)

That was beautiful.
I really loved it. (: Haha, the thing about the irony behind Julie being afraid of storms made me laugh. :XD

Great story! :shifty :con:

This was one of my favorite stories on mibba! im sad it has come to an end, but i think the ending was perfect!
I can not wait for your new stories!!

I want to cry! This story, from beginning to end, has been so amazing! If it wasn't a song/fan- fic, I'd advise you to try publishing it, of course that's easily fixable.

I am so glad I found out what happens in the end and that it was a happy end. So please don't write a sequel because I don't want anyone to die or something.

Julie and McKenna are seriously the funniest little things ever! I absolutely adore their characters! Funny, sarcastic and smarter then anyone would care to think!

Now Gracie and Brian, well you already know that I am absolutely in love with the Brian you created, however childish, idiotic and immature he can be. Gracie, well she had her own reasons and to her they were the right ones, so I forgive her.

After so much pain and tears on both parts they definitely deserve to be happy. The past is the past so they can look forward to the future. They're going to get married and have another kid or two and live happily ever after. I love that more than anything.

Anyways, this story was absolutely to die for and I'm definitely going to miss it. Of course I am going to read it again sometime later and I'll probably drop more comments too. XD Loved it and I can't wait for the new story!

this was such a good storie!! i loved it!!! i totally guess that Jules wanted a sib.!!
xoxjessxox

That was such an amazing ending!
I loved this story!!
I cant wait for your new one!!

I was reading this chapter so slowly, because I didn't want it to end. Never.

I'm depressed.

This was one of the best stories that has ever been posted on Mibba. Period. :file:

By writing "bumps" you meant pregnancy? Haha cause that was my first thought when I read this.

Now I'm off to read this chapter 10 more times. I'm pathetic

I'm excited for your new story!!! I absolutely CANNOT wait!

oh my god i want to cry!!! i'm so upset that this is over :( but it was brilliant fucking brilliant!! i don't think i can say that enough!!

aahhhh i love how you ended it, with a roundabout circle from beginning to end. that was too adorable :) i loved this story soooo much, it had me laughing from the first chapter!!

i can't wait for your next story!! hopefully it's soon :)

<3

and thanks for the mention!!

~this was the story best ever. even tho I don't like epilogues. :)
can't wait for the new story.. even tho it probably can NOT beat this one. :)

WTG!!!

*Claps extremely loudly*
That was amazing.
Like, I honestly adore the way you write.
I'm EXTREMELY excited for your next fic.
It's nice to see happy endings, since I'm not really good with writing those...
I'm depressing :]

But anways, this was a great story.
From beginning to end.

Let me just point out that I am scared to read this.
I do not want this story to end and if I don't read this last chapter, it has not ended for me!

But I'll read it. Even though this is just horribly depressing.

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Of course everyone was singing, but none as loudly as Brian—who was currently holding a video camera across the dining room table from his daughter.

Okay, I literally went "Awe!"
That is just too cute! It makes me want to cry. Probably because my emotions are all out of sorts because this is the death of my favorite story.
But it is really cute!

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Gracie’s arm was wrapped around his waist, and from where she sat, Julie could see the glitter of the diamond engagement ring on her finger when the light hit it.

:roll:

:grr:
:mrgun:

I wouldn't have forgiven her. Nope.Still don't like Gracie; probably never will. She effed up and she doesn't deserve someone as amazing as Brian. :XD

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Beside Gracie, stood a very pregnant Jordan with Johnny hugging her from behind.

:lmfao

OH MY GOD! I KNEW THAT WOULD HAPPEN!

:lmfao

Way to go, Big Little J!

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Some would think, “Well, of course she’s blessed. Just look who her father and four new uncles are.”

-cough- Did you know that I was going to say that and that's why you put it in there, Katelyn? :XD

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No, Julie just felt blessed because she actually had someone to call her father.

Oh my God! I think I'm gonna start crying, oh man! This is just an overload of cuteness right now and I don't know if I can handle it!
:crazy:

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McKenna Haner may have been twelve years old, but she, like Julie, was not above eavesdropping.

:roll:
Those sneaky girls.
They would.
I would, too.
Because I'm not above it, either.
Because how could I be if Brian was in my livingroom, I mean, come on!
I would be pressed flat against the wall listening.

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“Think they’re done yet?” She stage whispered.

-in a stage whisper-
That is way too loud to be whispering at a time like that! If it were me, I'd get caught, fo sho.

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“Purple!” Julie exclaimed jubilantly while reaching for the shirt. “Oh, wow! I love it! It’s my favorite color!”

DUH! Because you're Brian's kid and it's just the best damn color in the world! I'm painting the oposing walls in my room purple! [/random]
You really didn't need to know that, but I just thought I'd share! :con:

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“Jules,” Gracie said, “Go sit up on the couch there. There’s…um, well there’s something I have to tell you.”

Dun dun dunnnnnnn!

You're adopted!

Just kidding! That would suck. Seriously. I would fucking cry so much. But yeah.

BRIAN'S YOUR DAD! WOO! PARTY!

...Lucky.

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“This is—oh, wait a minute. You met Brian this morning, right?” Julie nodded, so Gracie went on. “I guess there’s really no other way to say this than to just tell you outright, but Brian…well, he’s your father.”

Blunt much? :roll:

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“Yeah, and?”

AHHH! :lmfao
Oh my God, hahahaha! She says it like it's no big deal!

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“Well, yeah, I already knew. I found out this mornin’. Man, you grown-ups sure are slow.”

But HOW? She couldn't have learned that from listening in! Or did she?

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“So does that mean you’re okay with me being your dad?”

-pouts- AWE!
The cuteness! I CAN'T HANDLE IT!

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Now she was fast asleep on the living room couch, face covered in frosting, and in a self-induced food coma. On top of her head was one of the gift bows from her presents and resting on her steadily moving stomach was a half-eaten piece of birthday cake.

:lmfao
Dude, I started laughing so hard, you have no idea. And some of it was deep, manly laughter. I sounded weird. :XD

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It was a custom purple and silver pinstriped Schecter with her name engraved on the body.

JEALOUS! SO JEALOUS!

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“MOM!DAD!”

That'd be me! But Dad is striked out because my parents are divorced, so obviously I wouldn't be screaming for my dad when he lives like seven miles away from me. I don't think that he would hear me.
But then again. You never know.

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“Well, she was conceived in one.”

Dude! Your daughter is in the room! Granted she probably doesn't know what the hell that means, but come on! That's icky.

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“What does conceived mean?”

Brian looked down suddenly at Julie’s head poking out from beneath the blankets. That wasn’t a question he was expecting out of her so soon.

You brought it on yourself, dumbass! :roll:
Don't say shit like that unless you're prepared to answer your daughter when she hears the stupid comments that come out of your beautiful mouth, Elwin.

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Brian thought about that for a minute before a small smile spread across his lips. He leaned in to kiss her briefly and murmured, “ ‘Cause the chicks dig it,” against her lips.

R-tard.
How did I know that was coming?

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Unbeknownst to both Brian and Gracie, Julie’s birthday wish would come true nine months later. And, like in all fairytales, they all lived happily ever after.

OH SNAP!
But, fucking a! Use protection! What is wrong with you two? :grr:

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…with a few bumps along the way of course.

Dude, not cool.
It makes me think there's gonna be a sequel! :crazy:

Well, I do believe that I should tell you this. You just did a whole, successful 23 chapter story and didn't put smut in it. I salute you. Not many people can do that these days. :XD

HA! I got special thanks! WOOOHOOOO!

But now, I'm feeling rather sad.

IT'S OVER! -bursts into tears-
I'm gonna miss this story so much! But I know you hate long stories and sequels so it's hopeless for it to continue. :XD

Hands down, one of THE best stories I have ever read! I think I've gotten into this story more than any of the others I've read before. And I hated Gracie more than I've ever hated a character before, too!

GOOD JOB, KATELYN! ::claps:

Now, I just have to sit here and wait patiently for your new story. :weird

By the way, I did for a brief second think that you forgot me in your author's note. :lmfao

That was the perfect ending to an amazing story!!!!!
I had a funny feeling that Julie's wish was to have a sibling! :D

You know I've loved this story from the very first chapter, it's made me sad, angry, happy. I've laughed, cried and even yelled countless times at my laptop :D

Loved the epilogue, loved the story, looking forward to the new one :)

That, my lovely, has to be one of the cutest, sweetest, and funiest endings to a story I have read. Absolutely wonderful. I've loved every minue of this story, and can't wait for the new one xx

Ahah awww, I could just picture Julie wearing her cake frosting!
And aww, that is so bloody sweet. I love the whole purple thing, too. xD
And when I read "…with a few bumps along the way of course." that part, I was thinking of the bumps pregnant ladies get.
Cute ending to a wonderful story, cant wait for your next <33

Awwww! I knew it!

I just read all the updates I missed while on holiday, and I am not disapointed :)
Good for the both of them kissing and making up, but I still can't believe that it is nearly the end of a brilliant story :(

That's exactly how I pictured it would happen. :XD I'm so glad they've finally come around to each other. *happy dance*

Ooooh one chapter left... CAN'T WAIT!!!

omg!!!!!! it's done already!?!?!?!?! (well with the epilogue still to come)
but....really?!?!?!?! awwee. i'm sad now lol. but this update was
amazing nonetheless!

OMG! I finally got caught up on all the chapters and i seriously felt like i was gonna cry! I cant wait for the epilogue!