EEEEEk! So I was there when you decided to make it a Matt story but I was secretly hoping you'd make a Brian story ('Cause let''s face it, you make the best Brian stories) and you did!
I adore the first chapter! It was wayy too cute! And I love that the main girl's name is Gracie. Very elegant and pretty, yet totally contradicts her personality.
I can't wait to see where this goes! Hopefully she didn't grow up to hate him or anything like that.
And one more thing. You know how in some stories the paragraphs in a chapter just come together and just fit? That's how I felt for this chapter. Everything just fit! Do I make any sense?
Meh, nevermind. Bottom line is that I loved it! More please? =D
this doesnt even have to be a story in fact i think it would be a great one shot so im not going to read the rest of it sorry but i like the way this first chapter ended
: )