'Cause the Chicks Dig It - Comments

  • IsliceTOAST713

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    ahahahahhhH! that is beyond cute.
    i can image a lil 9er saying to his dad "cause the chicks dig it" lol :]]
    May 11th, 2009 at 03:35am
  • nolongerhere

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    Katelyn!
    This is the most adorable story. I was smiling and laughing out loud through the entire thing.
    I'm subscribing!
    May 11th, 2009 at 03:29am
  • click it. BETCH

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    wellz

    i love it so far!
    May 11th, 2009 at 03:18am
  • groteskq_fatality

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    lmao. thats sooo cute.
    only brian! :cute:
    hmmm this will definitely be interesting. Dance
    more please! :)
    May 11th, 2009 at 02:30am
  • Lala Loveletter

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    Yay! A new story!
    I honestly gasped when I found out.
    The beginning is so cute, I can tell this is going to be an amazing story.
    May 11th, 2009 at 02:27am
  • were.all.thieves.

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    amazing. I love it so for.
    can't wait for more.
    May 11th, 2009 at 02:24am
  • Fast_Melodic

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    “You can call me Brian in here.” He said gesturing around the kitchen before he lowered his voice. “But out there, it’s just Superman.” He finished, jabbing his thumb behind him to the backyard.
    Oh my God, that's so cute! :lmfao
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    She was a girl that wasn’t afraid of getting dirty. Brian liked that.
    Oh? That sounds like a sexual reference to me; but it might just be my dirty mind. Shifty

    I love it already and I cannot wait for more!
    I can tell that this story will be amazing just like all of your other stories were. I'm so glad that you didn't make a Matt story; Brian is waaay better, haha!
    And you made him one cocky little boy, I like that. I always picture Brian as the cocky little shit that terrorizes his whole neighborhood.
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    “What if I told you I could fly?” ...

    “You can not.” She said with an eye roll.

    “Can too.” Brian insisted proudly. “I’ll bet you a kiss I can.”
    AHH! I love it, dude! I love every part of this chapter! If you haven't noticed, I'm commenting as I'm reading it, so I don't miss anything, haha!
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    “Well you see Gracie, if I bet you a kiss, that means that if I lose, I have to kiss you.”

    “And if you win?” She prodded questioningly.

    “You have to kiss me.” He replied with a devilish smirk on his handsome face.
    That Haner is one sneaky little shit!
    Like I already said, I love this story already! And you need to update again real soon!
    May 11th, 2009 at 02:21am
  • Krista-Snaps

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    Brian's last line cracked me up. XD
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:52am
  • syn avec moi

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    this is too cute.
    its awesome.
    *subscribing* :D
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:44am
  • kjones543

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    Lol
    Love the first chapter
    Can't wait til the next one!
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:42am
  • tom sykes;

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    sounds like a great story! can't wait for more =]
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:37am
  • ZHAFARINA;

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    i lovelove the first chapter!
    ahahaha." cos the chicks dig it?"
    that got me laughing mannnn
    you're an awesome writer y'know that?
    more soon?
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:29am
  • Initial Flame

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    Awesome first chapter! I <3 it already !
    Haha, and I laughed! xD
    More soon!
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:14am
  • WOAHdreambig

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    aww
    seems like its off to a good start
    thats really cute
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • FuckNo

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    That's fucking adorable. XD

    I love it.

    *subscribes*
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • musicsaveslives.

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    hey katelyn!
    you're amazing!

    love thiss.
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:05am
  • A_Dirty_Syn

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    I loved it, nice introduction.

    Your a great writer, i liked how you started the story and ended the chapter with
    "'cause chicks dig it"

    Priceless. Is this a band story or is it just the characters? I'm not sure if that is supposed to be a big part of the story or it doesn't really matter if you do.

    If it is just tell me, I won't trip off of it.

    Update!!!
    May 11th, 2009 at 01:02am
  • Megan Shadows

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    the first chapter was so cute
    cant wait for more
    May 11th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • Bamm!

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    I really liked it.
    You should definately write more soon.
    May 11th, 2009 at 12:51am
  • TalkingIsMyLife

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    I can tell that this is going to be super cute! I can't wait to see where you take this!
    Please update soon!
    May 11th, 2009 at 12:47am