Care For Me Not, I'll Hurt You Too Much - Comments

MONABEANS!
(do you remember me?!)
Oh my God! Fantastic UPDATES!
Your storywriting, as usual, kicks ass!! 8)

I'm not so sure who's doing the beating.
I'm going for her dad, and that Gerard maybe had gone away for the weekend
or she was imagining him not being there that day.
Or..something.

Update more when you can!

this is a realy good story. After i read the first chapter i couldnt stop reading it...cant wait for more XD

animal nitrate.:

there is a very small part of me that really wants gerard to be the one beating her . . . how fucked up is that?
IT WOULD BE SO PSYCHOLOGICALLY COMPLEX IF LIKE HER DAD DIED IN THE CRASH, TOO AND GERARD IS ACTUALLY HER FOSTER DAD AND SHE TOTALLY IMAGINED THE FAMILY AND EVERYTHING CUZ SHE WAS SECRETLY IN LOVE WITH GERARD AND JUST COULDN'T BELIEVE IT WAS HIM BEATING HER.

I know what you mean. But I couldn't take that happening to her. It already hints at something like that in places (kind of, not really). But Gerard's so nice in this story.

I started reading this story about 4 months ago, and I've read the whole thing. I'm so invested in this character.
There seems to be more hope in this last chapter. I could just be imagining things, too.

I love the story. Keep writing it, please. Another update soon would be fabulous.

OH
MY
GOD

pleeeeeeease don't hurt her so that she can't get with Gee

that would be criminal...
grr

awesome though, the most personal one for a while

Luv Iona
x x x x x x

But he never came.
THAT'S WAT SHE SAID!

there is a very small part of me that really wants gerard to be the one beating her . . . how fucked up is that?
IT WOULD BE SO PSYCHOLOGICALLY COMPLEX IF LIKE HER DAD DIED IN THE CRASH, TOO AND GERARD IS ACTUALLY HER FOSTER DAD AND SHE TOTALLY IMAGINED THE FAMILY AND EVERYTHING CUZ SHE WAS SECRETLY IN LOVE WITH GERARD AND JUST COULDN'T BELIEVE IT WAS HIM BEATING HER.

8DDDDDDDD

or she was just imagining all of it, the wreck and everything cuz she's even more fucking insane.

okay, maybe a LARGE part of me wants that to happen.
but your story is better and i'm sure it will end bettererly.

if you can't tell, i just downed 10 cups of coffee and a 2 liter of diet coke and it's 3 am.
YAYYYYYYY FOR NO SLEEPS!

GREAT STORY, NEED ANOTHER UPDATE SOONER.
TALKING LIKE RORSCHACH. WHY? MUST REMEMBER TO INVESTIGATE FURTHER.

Christ on a crutch, this update took a long time! :shock:

Seriously, this was a good chapter, and you know how much I hate cliffhangers! *shakes fist*

More when you can please!

Oh my god!
An update,
feels like its been so long!
But still love it of course!
Hopefully you can update soon though again! :D

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG SO GOOOOOOOOOD!
-dances-

LONG, BUT FUCKIN FANTASTIC!

erm, but.
You felt understanded and appreciated.
a little, small, infinitesimal mistake. but i thought you'd like to fix it.

i missed these updates!
keep it up!

ps. i've only now realized how fuckin crazy k is. i mean, traumatized, yes, but.

WHAT AM I SAYING?

Sweet shit, this was fucking GOOD....

I am not kidding.. this was such a good chapter, it was the most aggressive, I think... and I love how REAL she's becoming.. what I mean is, even though she's always riding on this whirlwind of despair, this chapter really broadened her feelings and made her really stand out to me... I really relate to Kendall in this chapter..

fucking AWESOME, sis! Keep up the great work! I LOVE YOU!! :hug: :crazy:

xoxo Cym

HELL YES!
I love long chapters

How are you haven't spoken to you in aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaages!!!

I did enjoy that one, it's sleepover time!!

lots of love
Iona
x x x x x x

YAY an update!!!!!!!
i was really mad at you but since the update was long and amazing i am forgiving you!
Please don't take as long to update. I Need This Story!!! :)

OMG MONA! WHAT THE FUCK I DIDN'T GET AN EMAIL FOR YOUR UPDATES!

DDDDDDDDDDD;
sorry it's been so long, but i swear it was only because of not getting emailed about it.

ANYWAY.
this story is still fantastic!
i neeed more!

i think gerard is very . . . ignorant. a dumb ass, basically.
but he has the best intentions and you can definitely see that.
i just wish someone would help this poor girl out!

so. MORE UPDANCES, PLEASE!
<3333

-Tara

Wonderful, amazing story, I think I read it all in 2 days its very addictive. : ]

This story is awesomeness!! :)

Ive finally caught up on this --- again! I know, I know, Im a horrible reader, right? But you love me anyways dontcha Monabeans? I hope so, cus Im gonna give you a looong comment now to encourage you to update.

Ok, so here goes.

I looved all the details of the wind and the rain, it was deffo a chapter turner, it made me feel like I was Ken, and it really pulls you into the story. Every time I read one of your chapters, I feel like Im actually inside the story, watching it all unfold before my eyes - its like an imaginative movie playing inside my head - this fic seems to have the power to make it seem so real, more so than fictional. Its just amazing! Its by far one of the best detailed fics, I've ever read. The story line's so good, and I think I have told you before - I wish I could write like you, dam! You're an amazing author Mona, I bet one day you'll be an famous author and I'll go "HEY! I know that girl. That's Mona from INO." :]

I love you. I miss our conversations. Haha, that's just crazy of me to say, cause you're on msn atm. :] I miss you!
xoxoxo LonelyInsecurity

This was great, sis! I feel bad too, because I DID read this, I just never commented. Forgive me? *holds out cup of coffee*

Anyway, this chapter was interesting, but it was SHORT!!! It's not against the law to post long chapters, you know :mrgreen:

aww!
wow, that chapter was a little confuzzling...
hmm...
update soon?

I love this story<3
I've been reading it for like...
Ever. and it's great :]
I think you should update soon, winkwink.

COMMENT HURRRRRRRRRRE!
:]

*comments*

Proper beaur of a story. <3

xo

Mona!
This is possibly the best story I've read.
*nods*
I really love it.
And I can't wait for your next update.

Much love!
<3 Caity.
x.