Care For Me Not, I'll Hurt You Too Much - Comments

I love the way you don't let Kendall think about love in any way
There's been no mention of love for anyone other than her cousin, and that's really important.
Most authors fall into the pit of drama turning to slush because the main character falls in love, and they emphasise that fact as a reason that the story continues the way it does.
But this is in the dark, it's like the audience thinks it knows what's going on, that Kendall has feelings for Gerard.
When in actual fact she's struggling with coming to terms with the fact that Gerard is even a friend to her.
It's so amazingly frustrating that it's awesome!

Luv Iona
x x x x x x

YAY UNDATE!!!!!!

OMG it's so good!!!!
You're amazing i can't wait for another fantazmic update!

YESHHHHHHH!!!!
WIN!

finally an update!!

oh my god, it's so good!!!
i love the little glimmer of hope that you get at the end. so fantastic.
and, as always, your imagery is so amazing. i could read this over and over again.
maybe i will.

I HEART YOU, MONA!!!!!!!!!!
fantastic update.

_Tara

WOWOWOWOWOWOW.
just read all the updates.
lovin it mona!
aw things just get worse and worse for kendal. :(
i'm sure he's not ashamed of her though.. :( </3

I just read the whole thing...
;_;

wow..

hey.. yeah.. :shifty:

i saw these chapters in production, so i can't really say what i haven't told you in person, and considering you're sitting right next to me while i'm typing this, it's kinda a futile effort when you think about it

i like how much you developed this, but the awkwardness still wasn't played to its capacity.. it's still good, and don't go into one of your "lack of inspiration" phases when you read this, but yeah, it's just my opinion.. i can't wait to see more of this, i am seriously addicted, though it is a little anti-climactic when i know what's going on 3 chapters ahead :shifty: LOVE YOU!!! :hug:

i finished them all and they're fantastic.

i just wish she would say what is on her mind. to clarify shizz!!

i miss you!!!!

PS: I agree wholeheartedly with the comment above mine from Ianto Jones
:D

Wow four comments in one go!
That's dedication!

Kendall, say something!
Say it's not you!
He's not ashamed he's worried
God I really feel for this girl!

Luv Iona
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those were beautiful updates Mona.
everything you write is just so believable and I find it easy to relate to emotionally even if the situations me and her go through aren't the same.
it's an amazing story and I'm so glad you go time to update again.
i miss you btw xo.

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OH EMM GEE
I KNOW I SAY THIS EVERY TIME YOU UPDATE BUT THEY'RE SO GOOD AND I MISS YOU

i love you!!!

i've only read one, but i'm going to read the rest right now!!!

PAGE CLAIM: i call it THE DARK KNIGHT PWNS

cuz i'm gonna go see it at midnight tonight!!!!!!!
be jealous.

OMG
I LOVE IT

I completely and utterly agree with mcrmcrmcr and Darling Darline. Please keep it coming. Your work is magnificant.

monaaaaaa
well i was talking to cym the other day and somehow got reminded that I had been meaning to read this
so I spent all day today doing just that ^__^.
I love it btw.
Just thought I'd let you know.
Hopefully you'll be back soon and can update more.
<333
frankie

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
That was so cute!

mcrmcrmcr:

I think that Kendall should move in with Gerard, and they should move to somewhere where her dad can't find her and live happily ever after
(That's just my little perfect world fantasy there...take no notice lol)

I agree! :tehe:

I cant wait to read more, Mona!
And I cant wait 'till you get the interwebzz back!!
<33

Wow joy!
She laughed!
Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
*does ecstatic dance*

I think that Kendall should move in with Gerard, and they should move to somewhere where her dad can't find her and live happily ever after
(That's just my little perfect world fantasy there...take no notice lol)

can't wait to read what happens next!
Although I might miss it if it's within the next week, I'm away on RAF camp woooooo
Luv Iona
x x x x x x

'Carefree' was not cheesy Mona! You lied to me! Lol. Well I knew it wouldn't be cheesy. Well I have to agree with the person two comments above. The perspective of the main character does make it seem a lot more personal. I love it and you! :]

M O N A ! ! ! ! ! !
your use of imagery is so frikkin incredible.
plus, I LOVE SWINGING!!
so. this was a very enjoyable update for me. and for every one, i'm sure.
fantastic.
i miss you already! come back soon! with more updates!
i love you.

-Tara

5th time lucky!

This is the 5th time trying to comment on these updates, and finally I succeeded!
Before I had to go to bed, had to go to work, comp crashed, you name it!
But now I can comment! :D:D:D

That was so sad!
Poor Kendall, thinking that it's all her fault.
Your writing is so powerful!
It's amazing

and I love the way the reader is the main character
it makes the emotions so much more raw, and personal
It's a unique way of writing, and a great one,
I'm sure I've said this before, but I LOVE IT!
hehe

Luv Iona
x x x x x x

Mona mona mona mona mona mona monaaaaaa!
I miss you!!!!!!!!
:crazy:crazy:

Wonderful updates!
As Tara said, it's nice to know what happened exactly.
*nods*
I cant wait to talk to you again!
I MISS YOU!
<333