Care For Me Not, I'll Hurt You Too Much - Comments

omg, wow.
I can't believe that she actually stayed with Gerard!
Even if she didn't want to though...
Gee cares!

YAY UPDATE!!!!

That was good i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

God, it sounds horrible, but I love how you conveyed the utter terror and confusion in this chapter... I feel like that most times... it was great though... though all your chapters are a bit short... *nudges* LOVE YOU! MORE WHEN YOU CAN PLEASE!!

omyz!!!
whats gee gonna say?
whats he gonna do?!
i cnt wait to read more.
more. more. more.
you know i love this fic. lol

Oh thank god for that, Ken's gona get some help that she needs and deserves!
happy now!
:D

Come on Ken, open up to Gerard and tell him the truth, be strong enough to stand up and tell him that it was your father, and not let him think that you did this to yourself.

Oh something good is happening yay!

Is something good happening for you too?
I really hope so

Love Iona
x x x x x x x

*New Reader*
*Subscribes*
Wow, its so good..but so depressing!

I liked how you included the fading images and sounds, it fit together in my mind and made the shock of her actually being there more effective. And you know how much I hate cliffhangers! *shakes fist* All in all it was a really good chapter, though kinda short in my opinion, but you did split it into parts, so that's the end of my complaining! I would like to see more of the shock that she actually came to his door and got the courage to knock, even if it was while she was on autopilot. We see her opening up more lately, but she's still extremely closed off, most of all to Gerard, so it should be made apparent she is going out on a limb to approach him even under stressful situations.

I can't wait for more, though I know your school is more important. Please take care of yourself. I love you and I miss you!

Mental..

I got so confused. xD

omg i love it!
i wonder what gerard is going to say?
can't wait for another update!

Yayyyy
Update :D

It was very good.
*nods*

I'm so sorry I don't currently have the time to write you a long detailed good comment or anything but fuck I will tell you one thing:

When I got the email from mibba today saying that you updated I seriously spazzed. I felt like running around the house a bunch of times and yelling happily or something.

that's how much I love your story.
xo

Oh hun, I really do hope things get better for you soon
Keep believing in the good in people, even if a Gerard doesn't come along, you still have Cym (and me if you want someone who knows absolutely nothing about you tehe)

Anyway, I was gona say something about it being nice to see something good happen again in this story, but I see that it's kind of your outlet, and you need it right now. So carry on with whatever you need to write, however it comes out.

Just know that we're here for you hun :D

Much love
Iona
x x x x x x

Dude, you write so frickin' well..
Its a different style to what I usually read (online and off), but its all...brilliant.
<3

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HOW DARE YOU
that was like . . . THE HIGHEST CLIFF I'VE EVER HAD TO HANG OFF OF IN A STORY.
that's not how the phrase is meant to be used and i'm not saying it right, but that's okay because you know what i mean!
and i'm fine with cliffhangers! but then when you add that you won't be updating for weeks, i get angry.

but not really, cuz i would never be mad at you.
fantastic update, mona!

and when i got your pm today, i literally squealed. literally.
JUSSOYANO

i love you!

i really did like this chapter, though the subject matter is a little too real for me... i think that's really what's great about your writing is that you leave the reader virtually no choice to get sucked into it and feel what you want them to feel. this was a great chapter, and as i've told you before, the thing about the wind is really a horrifying thought to me :shock:

please update soon, i don't want you to go insane like me. i love you and i miss you :hug:

Ianto Jones.:

become an author, please?

YEA! I forgot to mention that part.
Please become an author!
<3

woah Mona, I am seriously speechless after that last chapter. It was so beautiful in a completely heart-wrenching way. Every single word you used just seems perfect and formed this picture that in my head that just took my breath away.

become an author, please?

Ignore

:cheese:
Amazing. Simply amazing.
You're such a good writer Mona.
But I keep slipping in and out of that world and the real world XD

But anyhoo.
I love it!

Oh and, apologies for the length of that comment
And how complicated it sounds

I only just realised that myself hahaha
Hope it makes some kind of sense :D