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  • iwsytp1

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    Absolutely in love with this story.
    October 17th, 2015 at 04:39am
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    @ mrsmshadz
    swerving towards her... I thinks that's the correct way to say it but my English is practically learned from TV so I still have issues. Carla thinks that Val had been in Matt's house and that's why he didn't answer her calls. She's a bit paranoid or he's a bit of a whore...
    September 17th, 2015 at 11:19pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Finally Shocked I still think Matt is lying. A couple of questions. Firstly, how does one throw their car at someone? Cars are pretty heavy. Secondly, why would she think Matt was with Val? She would have seen him in Val's car when she threw it at her. Hope you update soon.
    September 17th, 2015 at 11:06am
  • mrsmshadz

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    It's okay. I will be patiently waiting.
    June 30th, 2015 at 02:49am
  • mrsmshadz

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    It's okay. I will be patiently waiting.
    June 30th, 2015 at 02:48am
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    @ mrsmshadz
    SoonSoon, I'm sorry it's taken so long, I've been a bit busy lately. Sad
    June 30th, 2015 at 02:22am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Update please!!!
    June 29th, 2015 at 08:49am
  • mrsmshadz

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    I can picture my Matty with a broken heart. It's so sad but so cute to know he would get like that all in the name of love! Can't wait for more!
    June 10th, 2015 at 06:58pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Oh ok. I didn't read the characters page. But thank you for filling me in.
    June 8th, 2015 at 10:12pm
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    @ mrsmshadz
    In the description of her character I wrote that a tragedy within Issa's household forced her to move in with the Banes family. Now, I realize that I have yet to explain the tragedy (thought I had written it on the character description, so I have to add it). Story goes, that Marissa's father murdered her mother right in front of her and was seconds away from her taking Issa's life when he was shot through a window by a police officer. It is usual for children that go through traumatic situations to block those memories in order to lead a "normal" life (very much like Dexter Morgan did) but they never feel fully normal because they know that they are missing a chunk of their lives and can't recall what happened in those formative years.
    June 8th, 2015 at 05:30pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Good update. But why did her sister block out her childhood memories?? Can't wait for the next update!!
    June 8th, 2015 at 05:52am
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    @ AJ9
    Thank you so much for reading. Next update will be on Wednesday, in the meantime, feel free to check out my other M. Shadows stories. I'm updating as fast as humanly possible. Smile
    June 7th, 2015 at 02:08am
  • AJ9

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    Loving this. Please update again soon. xxx
    June 6th, 2015 at 11:54pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Oh ok. Mr. Green
    June 5th, 2015 at 08:27am
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    @ mrsmshadz
    Jeremy Cobailt, I think I might have misspelled it in the first chapter that he was talked about but he's the guy that caused Matt and Val's problems in the first place.
    June 4th, 2015 at 08:22pm
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    @ mrsmshadz
    Jeremy Cobailt, I think I might've misspelled when in the first chapter that he was talked about but he's the guy that caused Matt and Val's problems in the first place.
    June 4th, 2015 at 08:21pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Who is Cobailt? I can't wait for the next update!!!
    June 4th, 2015 at 08:08am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Ahhh ok. Yeah, he's a big stupid dummy lmao
    June 1st, 2015 at 03:51am
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    @ mrsmshadz
    Carlee doesn't trust Matt. He hurt and humiliated her too much. She also is very self-conscious and way too proud which doesn't help at the moment of making decisions about her relationship.
    May 31st, 2015 at 04:25pm
  • mrsmshadz

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    Awe poor Matty! Why is he only going to be in her mind? Shouldn't he have a place in her heart?
    May 31st, 2015 at 07:31am
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