Sex and Cigarettes - Comments

i love the way you write.
this story's pretty dang cool. =)

well done! this is really good.. tidy!

Please please please start this story up again! I'm hungry for more.

This is great!

Can't wait for the next chapter. :]

:cheese:
I apologize for my belated comment, but my inbox officially hates me. :/
I agree complete with I will kill for her - this was a extremely brilliant and captivating chapter. (:

brilliant and a captivating chapter.

shalisa scumbag.:

-cries-
At risk of sounding like a hyper teenie with no life...

OMGGG UPDATEZZZ PLSTHNKS

:tehe:

As soon as I find some free time :cheese:

<3

-cries-
At risk of sounding like a hyper teenie with no life...

OMGGG UPDATEZZZ PLSTHNKS

:tehe:

nice to see you've finally updated, although i must say it wasn't quite like the previous two chapters.
don't get me wrong here, it's fine, but somehow it lacks the ability to make the reader visualize the writing.

anyway, it's good to see another chapter of this incredible story in which i really enjoyed so far.

and please, don't let us wait so long for the next one.

shalisasaurus.:

:lmfao, yes I sigged it.
It's beautiful! But at the same time, completely disasterous.
I fucking loved the update.
Tbh I don't really read much on here anymore.
But I just came to your profile to see if you had updated... and you did!

I love the dead pan humour in it.
I love the symbolism and comparisons.
I just... love it (:

Awwwwwwww shucks :cute:

:lmfao, yes I sigged it.
It's beautiful! But at the same time, completely disasterous.
I fucking loved the update.
Tbh I don't really read much on here anymore.
But I just came to your profile to see if you had updated... and you did!

I love the dead pan humour in it.
I love the symbolism and comparisons.
I just... love it (:

The Phantom.:

Amazing update(:
I have to admit I was quite excited when I saw it :tehe:
Lovely writing, I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Yeah, I haven't had much time or inspiration to write lately :cheese:
Aww thank you, I hope I can update again soon.

Amazing update(:
I have to admit I was quite excited when I saw it :tehe:
Lovely writing, I cannot wait for the next chapter!

shalisasaurus.:

Holy shit.
I've read call-girl stories before, but none like this.
None where the girl completely loathes her job, but is still completely void of any sort of indifference towards it

In bed I was like a cute little puppy, I'd come running as soon as they'd snap their fingers, I wouldn't roll over without a treat, and playing dead was just pure pleasure. - Your refernces to her job and a puppy really contrasted the severisty of what she was trying to portray.

I love how no identity has been disclosed yet, it makes her seem more eerie.

Vegas, hold me. - Best. line. ever.

<33

Tell me you didn't sig that :mrgreen:

Updated just for you tbh.

Holy shit.
I've read call-girl stories before, but none like this.
None where the girl completely loathes her job, but is still completely void of any sort of indifference towards it

In bed I was like a cute little puppy, I'd come running as soon as they'd snap their fingers, I wouldn't roll over without a treat, and playing dead was just pure pleasure. - Your refernces to her job and a puppy really contrasted the severisty of what she was trying to portray.

I love how no identity has been disclosed yet, it makes her seem more eerie.

Vegas, hold me. - Best. line. ever.

<33

The Phantom.:

Oh dear God I think I've found a live one!
This is, beyond amazing. It surpasses brilliant and is completely and utterly better than wonderful.
Your descriptions are more than I have ever hoped to read here, end of story.
I am both ashamed at the rest of Mibba for not discovering this gem, and not very suprised, seeing as though 98.9 percent of Mibbians prefer Ferard and Waycest to original ideas :/
To shoot my point across, I love, love, love this story and of course, your writing. Without a doubt you will hear more from me in the future.(:

you, my friend, have just made my day.

And I look forward to hearing from you (:

Oh dear God I think I've found a live one!
This is, beyond amazing. It surpasses brilliant and is completely and utterly better than wonderful.
Your descriptions are more than I have ever hoped to read here, end of story.
I am both ashamed at the rest of Mibba for not discovering this gem, and not very suprised, seeing as though 98.9 percent of Mibbians prefer Ferard and Waycest to original ideas :/
To shoot my point across, I love, love, love this story and of course, your writing. Without a doubt you will hear more from me in the future.(:

This is incredibly original, and I'm surprised nobody else has done anything similar.
I think this was my favourite line:-I held eternity in between my fangs.
It described her so beautifully.
This was really well written, and it is actually a favourite original fiction of mine now.

:oops: nemoj se ljutiti, šala mala...

medke:

pa evo razumijem škola i sve, ali mjesec i pol dana bez novog chaptera, to je krajnje bezobrazno :) :) :)

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