Sex and Cigarettes - Comments

strasno....

ella.
damn. you can write better then 99% of the people on this board.

you have such a neat style, all your own.

brutally honest, and an amazing perspective, a black wido jezebel. I like that although at times you are almost disgusted with her outlook on things, you can't help but sympathize and feel sorry for the situation she has found herself. I guess it's true, "Throw stones at a dog, it will never eat from your hand again".

Your choice of protagonist is interesting in that she's like cracked crystal...fragile and delicate..but still beautiful even when fractured.

Helena's Death Scene:

This is different.
I like it.!

Thank you.

This is different.
I like it.!