Eloquence - Comments

He's such a sweetie. Update soon!

that was so cute. you're good at making me want him ahahhaha :)

i shall only comment if you promise to update. shit, i am commenting. you better keep you end of the deal i just made ;] lol

Awe, I wish I knew where he was taking her, XD Great update though, =)

OH YOU.
YOUUU.
;3

I don't even know what to say. I'm just so glad you updated. This is such a brilliant story with so, so much potential. I know you've heard me literally worship your feet enough, but I absolutely LOVE reading your writing. It's such a... relaxing thing to do, to be honest. Your writing is like a drug to me, I seriously can't get enough. I love Jordan, she seems like such a brilliant girl. You know, those ones who are seemingly perfect in most aspects, yet are not like... obnoxious. Idk, she just seems like an amazing girl. Andrew already has a ton of my love, he is so, so cute in this. I want him to take me out. And I am REALLY excited to see where he's going to take her. I really want to know. So update soon?

AND ^^ that picture is too cute.

like zomg, he's just so cute! ;3
I thought you'd enjoy that photo btw...

I love this story. Actually I love all your stories. I don't believe that I could ever say it enough to get my point across, you know? Anyways, I like how you fast forwarded a bit and advanced their relationship. I loved how you developed Jordan's character by the way. Like how even though she's young she's mature, not only physically but mostly intellectually. It adds well to their dilemma of an age gap, granted its not that bad, there still is one.

loved the update!
it was so good :)
I wanna know where they're going too!
Please post another one soon!

I WANNNA KNOW WHERE THEY'RE GOING!
this is sooo adorable.
i love this.

awwww

AAAH

YOU REALLY DID UPDATEE.
Awweh, you're amazing. I love this story. It's just so awesome, because the plot so far is rather simple, but the way you write is so... enchanting. You just draw us in with your intriguing characters and their wonderful speech and... I don't even know how to describe it. You are just amazing at what you do. And that little bit at the end was so unbelievable cute, I just loved it. I'm getting a little jealous now, I wish I was Jordan. XD I can never find anything bad about your writing. You have a great talent. I'm glad I can read your work.

"I don't even know. I guess I just hate being young, so I grew up quicker. Well, tried to, at least."

I felt like I could indentify with Jordan in that part of the dialogue. Amazing plot, amazing story. Need I say more?

can i get away with just a simple smile (: ? of course not. lol

I was wondering when you were planning on updating this. :3
But LOL, he sitting in his boxers watching her sleep for like 4 hours? Such a strange boy that Andrew is, sweet- but strange.
I'm really starting to like his character by the way. I rather enjoy how you portray him, him being a smart-ass and all but sweet and mindful of Jordan. And again, you're making me like him more so than before! (:

ugh, this chapter was so gooood.
i want to read more!

i love this story already. andrew is love :)

I am falling in love with this story.
He's going to corrupt her, haha.

aw how precious

Amazing so far.
I love it. :)