Eloquence - Comments

Please update? It's my favorite story and I want to see it being finished

please update!! this is so good!

favourite story on mibba and it's not updated! such a shame! :( pleaseeee update

Updateeeeee pleaseeeee :(

ahhhh please update this story! (:

God, it would be hilarious if Andrew got more attached to Jordan after having sex and Jordan started pushing him away because of it. He thinks that having sex will "cure" him of wanting her and wanting to be with her. What if it had the opposite effect? That would be perfect for how much of an ass he is. I just reread this entire story by the way. And it was still as perfect as the first time.

Missing this story so much! Your writing is perfect and, it's just the best Andrew fic.

I missss this story.

OH MY GOD you have to update this!
I'm in love with your writing, the layout, Jordan, their relationship and of course Andrew!

read the whole story last night and i love it <3 ^_^
waiting for the next update.

You should update! I really like this story (hence there isn't a lot of A.V fanfictions out there).The plot is pretty unique and the characters are interesting.Although,Jordan is a really good character and Andrew is really well portrayed.Well done and please update soon!

Love this story!

Thank you for the updatee!! I'm so excited. You are still an amazing writer. :)

I was psyched to see this update, although I really hope everything backfires on Andrew. And I agree with oreo-child, I think Jordan has more will power than to just give in to him. Andrew needs to fight for her affection, and not just assume that she'll give him what he wants. I loved this, and I can't wait for more!

I'm so in love with this story, I'm really hoping everything back fires on Andrew. Please update soon!

I love it when you update :)
So, for the record, I have every chapter of this saved to my computer. I'm gonna email it to my iPod, and have it saved on there so I can reread it when I'm out and about. (I promise NEVER to post your story anywhere, regardless if I give you credit or not. I'm not a pirate nor a plagiarizer)
Really excited to see how the next chapter plays out. When it comes to Andrew VanWyngarden (fictional or not), his sexual appetite is an enigma amongst his fans. So it's interesting for you to combine a chilled-out guy like him with the primal urges of a barely post-pubescent male- it gives us someone who doesn't view sex as mere fun, but as a spiritual hunger that especially flares up when he's not at eternal peace (this was best defined by the semi-tortured mental debate he was having at the beginning of chapter 18).
Honestly, I'm hoping for a persistent and reluctant Jordan- at least for the time being. She's done so many things to be older for Andrew, and he needs to meet her halfway. Is he that sadistic that he has to take every shred of her innocence, only to see what it would mean to him in the end? Is she that submissive to his every whim that she'd give up her whole identity to be what he wants? He needs to work for her (lack of a better term, sorry) "goodies" (I have to apologize for that again. ew.), and not just tell her little things that apparently don't mean as much as she thinks. Maybe a forced meeting of the parents (whether it's Jordan's mom and dad, Andrew's mom, Casey maybe, or all four?), or a night of confessions. I think Jordan has too much will power to just lay down.
Either way you go with this, I'm ready for the next installment. You, madam, are a phenomenal author, and this is the one subscription that I lose my complete shit over when there's a new notification for it in my email. Hope you do update more often :)

Asshole I hope she rips his heart in two lol but I guess that is just him deluding himself

ughh i hate that andrew just wants her for sex =(
update soon please

Oh. My. God. Andrew is such an ass. I had a feeling this was going to happen. >_< , but nonetheless, I enjoyed it.

Wow, I really want to slap Andrew right now.
What a typical BOY lol.
Only wanting one thing, geez.
He'll regret it if he leaves her, I'll bet.

I'm so glad you updated :)
I hope you update again soon!